Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #109:Just My Luck(Niall Horan)

author: FireWithin13

rating: PG-13

read it if: you like bad girls

plot:

Lucky Clark is an aspiring writer, hoping for a big break.

Niall Horan is a single father struggling to find love in the unforgiving world.

He may also be the big break that Lucky is looking for.

Between the two of them and some matchmaking done by Niall's five-year-old daughter, Misty, things are about to get interesting.

review:

Give a round of applause for this edition of "why you SHOULD read this":

　

-Here the cards are swaped,since instead of a story about a bad boy and a good girl, is about a rebel girl with a lots of trouble from the past and a good guy that struggles with a loss and being a single dad

　

-The names are so curious. As long as I remember the only place I heard the name "Lucky" was in the Britney Spears song,and the name "Misty" makes me think of the word "mystical" and zones me out hehe. So points of originality and special features for the book

　

- It's funny and cute how they(the girl and Niall) call each other by their last name and the crazy things they do,for example:kissing to be sure of stuff

-The developing is fast, so the dragging issue is nearly impossible(saying nearly because results may vary)

　

-And last thing is that the chapters are song inspired. I think that's original and that helps musicians get more inspiration for new projects(since you can get a situation and make a song out of it) and people who loves music to discover new stuff

　

With a short but good plot,good grammar,great development,very interesting,cute,and funny...read it if you just wanna relax with something simple but pleasant to your eyes

note to author:

If you're reading this,thanks for making and recommending this. It's a very awesome story,and though I think it's cliche seeing a matchmaker kid, it's still readable. What I loved the most is that you included song titles of my fave group, male artist and band, so I shall give you a really tight virtual hug haha. Soon i'll check the sequel,so stick around.Keep writing and take care ;)

　

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