Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #165: Dear Harry(Harry Styles)

author: alyloves1direction

rating: PG-13

read it if: you want a adorable, yet suspenseful story

plot:

Harry and Ella are in love, and have been for as long as they can remember. When Harry tells her that he has to leave for a year, Ella doesn't take it so well. She copes by writing in a journal, and decides to retell the story of how Harry and Ella came to be.

review:

Time for a almost extinct "why you SHOULD read this"

-The author of this story tried the hardest POV in writing: 2nd person(if you haven't taken a nice class of English is were the narrator tells a story to someone in specific). And I gotta bow down; she really kept amazing track of the narration even on the end where she broke the stimulation of a girl writing in a book.

-Half of the story is like a biography of them, but the author made a good balance between giving full details without boring the reader from excess of info

-This keeps the mystery vibe throughout all the story that never fails to keep the reader stuck around to know if the guy comes back or not

And well I have more reasons of why I really liked this, but I'll just leave the ones above for you to decide

With a simple but effective plot, good grammar, amazing development... read it if you want a example of how 2nd person POV works or you want to fall in love and bite your nails from nervousness at the same time

note to author:

If you're reading this, thanks for making this. I wanna hug you and kill you at the same time; hug because this was amazing like all your works, but kill you cause now I'm afraid of reading books that has soldiers in it haha. Only recommendation is to keep the good work you're doing. Keep writing and take care ;)

First review of my summer! hope you enjoyed this. Comment, share, vote, follow, read my fanfic reviews book vol.1, if you read teen fiction read my teen fiction reviews book, and if you have a story share it here or message me ;)

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