Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #159: Bad Meets Good(Harry Styles)

author: zarrysupreme

rating: PG-13

read it if: you want a cliché yet amazing book

plot:

"Before you can see the light you have to deal with the darkness"

review:

Pros and cons broadcasting on 3,2,1...

　

-First pro is that the author really knows how to write, cause even though this is a pretty cliche story(the complicated love story between a good girl and a bad boy) it's simply irresistible

-The mystery it has is also high quality cause you can make guesses, but you just simply gotta wait until it's revealed because it's unpredictable and the story gives very light hints

-And the ending has a amazing cliffhanger that had me in pure suspense and automatically makes the reader check the sequel. #geniustrick

　

-The con is the sudden change in narration, because it started in 1st POV but suddenly the author decided to change it on 3rd POV, and that left many people confused.

　

With a barely descriptive plot, needs some editing because of narration, good development...read it if you want a pro book

note to author:

If you're reading this, thanks for making this. This book is simply awesome with its power that makes the cliche look interesting, the mystery of Carter, Harry's comments,etc. the only thing is the POV thing I mentioned; you prefer 3rd POV and that's good(that's the best way to write in my opinion), but please just take a time to rewrite everyhting in a same narration to stop future confusions. Keep writing and take care ;)

　

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