Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #163: Five Men And A Baby(One Direction)

author: DontForgetYourTea

rating: N\R

read it if: you like fanfics based of movies or books

plot:

When one opens a door, one expects to find someone outside. A someone that is not a baby, I mean.

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Living alone as five, very eligible bachelors, Niall, Liam, Louis, Zayn and Harry have never really considered settling down. Why would you? The fame, the fortune, the ladies, it's enough to turn any man's head away from family life. But when a baby turns up on the doorstep, it's up to the five of them to take care of her alone.

Really, though. How hard could it be?

review:

Time for pros and cons!

　

-This is the type of books that are very helpful when you want a extreme visualization of what would be like if another person did the role of a movie or a book. This is the fanfic version of the movie "3 men and a baby", so if you remotely had that craving of wondering a lot with that movie this could help a little bit

-And also this shows not everybody has the nature to be a flawless parent, and because of that a lot of crazy and funny situations are involved hehe

　

-The only cons are that the book isn't the very irresistible trype and the ending is a little confusing

　

With a good plot, good grammar, a little fast development... read it if you want something simple to read

note to author:

If you're reading this, thanks for making this. I give 3 stars to this cause it wasn't a crap story and I could understand very well the original movie, but this wasn't a story I would wait impatiently to read and leave everything to check this when a update came. I don't think I have anything else to say, so keep writing and take care ;)

　

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