- It could have been something else instead of 'Cappuccino' seeing how you named the book with this just cause Joshua orders it at the cafe.
Cover :: 8/10
- It should have been a little more attractive and eye-catching. Also instead of writing the title in a vertical manner it should have been in a horizontal manner.
Description :: 7/10
- It's good but it should have been a little more informative or suspenseful.
Pace :: 9 /10
- Well the pace of the chapters is good and it continues from where it was left so it's nice.
Concept and plot :: 8/10
- Well the book is still not complete so i can't really say much but till now the plot is good…there's curiosity & suspense.
Characters Development :: 10/10
- The characters are all good and they are not looking forced so it's amazing.
Grammar and Vocabulary:: 7/10
- There are many grammatical errors like in each paragraph there's at least two to three mistakes.
Writing style :: 9/10
- The writing style is good you just need to work on changing the perspective's like u gotta tell the reader's whose 'pov' is going on cause just drawing a line doesn't show that it's Haeyoon' s pov or Joshua's pov u gotta write it like 'Joshua's POV' .
- I'm saying this because I got confused like I'm done reading half of it and then I'm realising like oh this person's pov and all. And you did it in the last chapter so do it in the previous ones too.
- Also don't leave a blank space in between, it gets annoying…as the reader is just scrolling & scrolling not knowing when the next text is gonna come. - Also whenever you are writing a dialogue do keep it like, "Hey". I'm not saying you haven't done it, it's just that you have kept some in this manner and the rest is in just normal font. So keep in mind to differentiate them.
Overall impression :: 9/10
- Till now it's good just work or your spelling mistakes and grammatical errors als
Rating of the book :: 8/10
Total :: 82/100
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