Title :: 8/10 Different, bold and matches with the plot of the story. (Big thumbs up.)
Cover :: 8/10 It's way too dark. Unable to recognize the face of the protagonist or the fonts. I would suggest using a lighter shade or increase the saturation, or use some brownish shade to give ancient vibes.
Description :: 9/10 Creatively written with few catchy lines and quotations mentioned. A basic idea of the book comes from it.
Character Development :: 9/10 The characters are very well placed. The roles and the attitude of the characters are perfect. I liked the sassiness of the female lead and Jimin's mother. The character of Jimin is to the point. A king should be like that. Side characters are also fine.
Pace :: 9/10 The story is smoothly going on. Maintain this pace.
Grammar and Vocabulary :: 9/10 There are no such grammatical mistakes. The Use of punctuation is good. Sentence formation is also fine. Good application of vocabulary.
Concept and plot :: 9/10 It might seem like historical fiction, but I guess it's not. It's a way more different and twisting story. The way you emphasized on a female lead and a relationship between king and queen is very interesting and I am waiting to read the full story.
Writing style :: 9/10
From the beginning, naming the chapters, using banners. The way you maintained the rhymes are well and good. Maintain the way you are executing your imagination.
Overall impression :: 10/10 Your story is really interesting and everyone should give it a try. Historic fiction is really something one should read. I personally liked your book. You just need to focus on a few things like the cover, I said. Don't add too many characters. Use a few substories to make the main plot bold. That's all. Your book is well and good. Thank you for writing such a book. Keep writing and entertaining. <33
Rating of the book :: 9/10
Total :: 89/100
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