77. House Rivalry : Draco Malfoy X OC

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Author of the book dr3am_caf3

Review by Meltedchocolate7

Title :: 10/10

It's a really creative name for the book and as it is not really used, it is eye-catching to any readaholic.

Cover :: 6/10

The book cover doesn't really give Harry Potter vibes. And it doesn't really lead to the theme of this book either.

Description :: 10/10
The description is very understandable as well as enjoyable to read.

Pace :: 9/10

The pace of the events is well set in place but it goes too quickly. There aren't as many details written in every circumstance either.

Concept and plot :: 8/10

The concept is in good relation to the subject and theme but the plot isn't in the right place. It could have been better in my opinion.

Characters Development :: 10/10

At a point where each of the characters of this book has their own personality and way of thinking.

Grammar :: 10/10

The words are well used, at the perfect time.

Writing style :: 10/10

The words are written with a sense of humor and emotions in a fictional way, which attracts fanfiction lovers.

Overall impression :: 8.5/10

The book is amazing but needs more editing.

Rating of the book :: 9/10

I would love to say that the story is interesting and charismatic but with my suggestions, it could be better from my perspective. Keep writing and entertaining!!

Total :: 90.5/100

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