Title :: 4/10 Very simple title which does not really attract the readers. Try to make it unique.
Cover :: 6/10 The cover is okay but it looks like too many elements have been included in the picture and it looks messy. The picture is also dull.
Description :: 3/10 The description is too straightforward to make the reader curious about the happenings. Try to make it more unique to attract the readers and also not to give the whole description of the story which in results will make the description part gist
Pace :: 6/10 The book at some parts was so slow which was not really needed but those parts which were needed to be descriptive were so fast that it looks like all the sub stories are only included in only one part.
Concept and plot :: 4/10 The concept of the story is like a fairytale which is really not so famous in Wattpad. It looks like except for the skinship part, it is for toddlers. All the sub stories included are not so unique for the teenage and adult to read.
Characters Development :: 5/10 All the characters played their role perfectly but there is nothing special and unique in their character. It felt like I already knew what would happen. There are one or two suspense stories in this book and nothing special.
Grammar :: 6/10 There are a few grammatical mistakes and typing errors here and there and I tried to correct it while reading it in the comment section.
Writing style :: 8/10 Your writing style is okay, by using simple yet formal words make any story easy to read. But I need to focus more on the pace.
Overall impression :: 4/10 By reading the whole story it feels like I'm reading a fairytale as I already said earlier. In this Wattpad, children within 6-7 years are very rare to see but there are more teenagers, adults and young people so if you want to increase your reads then you need to focus on writing books which can be a mixture of fiction and reality, not innumerable stories. Try to improve more. Keep writing Keep learning. <3
Rate of the book :: 4.5/10
Total: 50.5/100
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