Secret Agent, Counterspy (𝑪�...

By sereniity-

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Completed December 2017. Highest ranking #9 in Mystery/Thriller! Mature topics: suicide & self harm. ••••••... More

Chapter 1- Vanessasarily In Love
Chapter 2- Ice Hockey Match
Chapter 3- Kieran Outraged
Chapter 4- The Art Competition
Chapter 5- Theo And Leo
Chapter 6- Clyde's Jealous
Chapter 7- The Wedding!
Chapter 8- What On Earth Is She Doing Here?
Chapter 9- The Good, The Bad, The Ugly...
Chapter 10- A Whirlwind Of Calamities
Chapter 11- Tornado, Tornado
Chapter 12- Secrets About Vanessa
Chapter 13- Scrapbook
Chapter 14- Don't Do It, Clyde
Chapter 15- Mad At Vanessa!
Chapter 16- New Girl, Lauriel
Chapter 17- Just Leave Kieran Alone, For God Sake!
Chapter 18- Kieran Gone Crazy
Chapter 19- Katherine Gone Crazy
Chapter 20- Winding Kieran Up
Chapter 21- Slime, Slime, Slime
Chapter 22- Vanessa On Kieran's Nerves
Chapter 23- Lauriel
Chapter 24- Lauriel Runs Away
Chapter 25- Annoying Text Messages!
Chapter 26- What Happens Next?
Chapter 27- Doctor, Doctor
Chapter 28- Leave And You Die, Lauriel
Chapter 29- Shouldn't Have Signed The Contract!
Chapter 30- Agent Astera
Chapter 31- "You Wasted Our Hologram Credits Just To Say Hi?!"
Chapter 32- Fail And You Die
Chapter 34- Wrong Test Room, Lauriel
Chapter 35- Just Don't Take The Test, Lauriel
Chapter 36- The Perilous Obstacle Course Test
Chapter 37- Oh No, They Didn't
Chapter 38- Win, Lose Or Cheat?
Chapter 39- World War Three
Chapter 40- Marcel And Tyrese Back At It Again
Chapter 41- Jeez, Marcel And Tyrese, What Have You Done To Kieran?
Chapter 42- Spider Mania 2
Chapter 43- Kieran's Predicament
Chapter 44- Wrong Test Room, Kieran...
Chapter 45- The Test Of Justice
Chapter 46- The Test Of "Justice"
Chapter 47- The Knife That Killed Me
Chapter 48- Kozak Gone Evil [1]
Chapter 49- Kozak Gone Evil [2]
Chapter 50- Secret Agent, Counterspy
Chapter 51- Well, Hello There, Esperanza
Chapter 52- Get That Trophy!
Chapter 53- Best Believing, Looks Are Deceiving
Chapter 54- Diana Valentine
Chapter 55- What's Esperanza Up To Now?
Chapter 56- Esperanza Upset
Chapter 57- "Hidden" Secrets
Chapter 58- Kozak Out Of Control!
Chapter 59- Late For The Mission
Chapter 60- Never Trust Kieran And Esperanza
Chapter 61- Kozak's Annoyed
Chapter 62- The Trouble With Elephants
Chapter 63- Holographic Elephant
Chapter 64- Kozak Gone Slightly Insane
Chapter 65- "You're Jealous, Kieran"
Chapter 66- Secrets About Kozak
Chapter 67- Step Right Over & Watch Her Put It Down
Chapter 68- Rhyme Or Die?
Chapter 69- Why, Kozak, Why?
Chapter 70- 'Cause Baby, You're A Firework
Chapter 71- Beautiful Present
Chapter 72- Kozak Jinxes Esperanza On Her Birthday
Chapter 73- The Date
Chapter 74- 99 Problems And Counting
Chapter 75- The Tragedy Of...
Chapter 76- Mysterious But Real Truths
Chapter 77- Kozak Gone Evil Again
Chapter 78- Arista Outrages Kozak
Chapter 79- Falling, Appalling, Trouble Is Calling
Chapter 80- Do It Like A Brother, Do It Like A Dude
Chapter 81- You Have A Brain, Use It. Ring The Doorbell Before I Lose It
Chapter 82- Kozak And His Sister Fall Out
Chapter 83- More Secrets About Kozak
Chapter 84- Well, That Was Unnecessary & Totally Uncalled For!
Chapter 85- The Booby Trap
Chapter 86- "Hastalavista, Valentina"
Chapter 87- For Goodness Sake, Kozak, Just Forgive Arista! [1]
Chapter 88- For Goodness Sake, Kozak, Just Forgive Arista! [2]
Chapter 89- Missing Link
Chapter 90- Cynthia Rose To The Rescue!
Chapter 91- Speechless
Chapter 92- The Tragedy Of Dr Kozak
Chapter 93- There Arista Goes
Chapter 94- Cynthia Meets Kozak
Chapter 95- Cynthia Rescues Kozak
Chapter 96- Kozak Rescues Everybody Else
Chapter 97- Kozak Gone Evil Once Again!
Chapter 98- "Can You Keep A Secret? It's About Lauriel."
Chapter 99- Frantically Texting Kozak
Chapter 100- It's The Final Countdown [Part 1]
Chapter 101- It's The Final Countdown [ Part 2]
Chapter 102- You Can't Spell "Diana" Without The Word "Die"
Chapter 103- The Point Of No Return
Chapter 104- Sometimes, You've Just Gotta Make A Run For It
Chapter 105- Where's Arista Though?
Chapter 106- Good Girl Gone Bad, Really Bad
Chapter 107- Kozak In Serious Agony
Chapter 108- The Real Truth Behind Arista
Chapter 109- Miracles, Miracles, Miracles!
Chapter 110- Even More Secrets About Kozak
Chapter 111- Expect The Unexpected [1]
Chapter 112- Expect The Unexpected [2]
Chapter 113- The Third Wheel
Chapter 114- The Massive Rhyming Argument Between...
Chapter 115- Where's A Doctor When You Need One?
Chapter 116- You've Just Gotten Yourself Into So Much Trouble, Kieran
Chapter 117- Martinez And Cynthia Back Again
Chapter 118- Why Esperanza Hates Cynthia Rose
Chapter 119- To Join Or Not To Join, That Is The Question
Chapter 120- A Rather Unexpected Visitor...
Chapter 121- Maria, Maria, Maria, Maria, Maria
Chapter 122- "Kieran Is Crazy, Dr Kozak! C-R-A-Z-Y!"
Chapter 123- Esperanza's Surprise Birthday Party
Chapter 124- What Maria Grace Wants, Maria Grace Gets
Chapter 125- Kozak's Gone Depressed Again
Chapter 126- Million Dollar Birthday Present
Chapter 127- Sorry Doesn't Push It, Kieran
Chapter 128- Today's A Gift, So It's Called The Present
Epilogue: A Happy Ending.... For Most People Anyway
End Of Book

Chapter 33- Lauriel's Doomed

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Inspirational quote: One kind word can change, or even make, someone's day.

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Lauriel was doomed.
Hopelessly doomed.

Why?

She was supposed to start the test twenty minutes ago but she didn't, the first fifty girls that were supposed to take the test still had an awful lot of time left.

They used up seven and a half minutes, which gave them only two and a half to complete the Perilous Obstacle Course Test.

Since Lauriel was number 77 out of a hundred, that therefore meant she was going to be the twenty seventh person in there.

She had already witnessed ten girls die, eleven give up, seven throw up and twenty two girls still somehow alive and miraculously doing the test.

And whilst she was watching them, Lauriel couldn't help but think to herself:

I have to ace this test.
I can ace this test.
And I certainly will ace this test.

Just believe in yourself Lauriel! She thought to herself internally. You can do this. And even if you don't, it's better thinking I'm glad I did the perilous obstacle course rather than I wish I did the perilous obstacle course test.

Thank God that she wasn't the only girl taking the test at the moment, otherwise that would have just made everything more daunting.

It seemed like there were about a million girls around her, when there were only about forty nine, if not less, and they were either doing one of four things:

-screaming.
-crying.
-throwing up.
-acting perfectly nonchalant, as if this test was not the scariest thing in the world (even though it probably was) like Lauriel was doing at the moment.

And Lauriel could have sworn that the girl in front of her was dead.

Why she thought this? Because she was lying down with her body on the ground, face staring at the ceiling with sunglasses, looking probably lifeless.

Since there was practically nothing else to do, Lauriel went ahead and did it, she gently kicked the girl checking to see whether she was alive or not.

Nope, Lauriel thought to herself, still helplessly glaring at her. Must have fainted. She's dead.

That was what Lauriel had thought anyway. Moments later, the girl with the sunglasses on the floor got up, giving Lauriel a look of death.

"What you did was just really painful. I felt that. It really hurt."

"Well I'm sorry for kicking you in the chin then," Lauriel lied through gritted teeth, looking away from her instantaneously.

She then came to realise that the girl had a name tag with her initials on it, which was MGS. In the meantime, Lauriel's initials were LCW, and the girl was pretty sure she knew Lauriel from somewhere, if not then school.

"Hang on a second..." MGS told Lauriel, getting up and casually sitting down in the spare seat next to Lauriel, which made Lauriel half irritated because she didn't ask to sit there, she just sat there.

"You look really familiar all of a sudden..."

Do I? Lauriel thought to herself, not really saying anything.

And hopefully Dr Kozak couldn't "read her mind" from here either.

"I'm pretty sure I know you. Do I... I don't know. Know you from somewhere?"

Lauriel didn't reply. It was then that the girl removed her sunglasses, and when she removed her sunglasses, she gasped.

"Lauriel!"

Lauriel looked at her blankly, then gasped as well once she figured out who she was.

"Maria Grace!"

What a lucky coincidence, the two girls bumping into each other in a place that certainly wasn't school.

They then hugged each other, because like Lauriel and Kieran, the two had finally made up, despite their deep hatred for one another before, despite the Lauriel/Kieran/Kendrick incident.

"What are you doing here?" They both asked each other at the same time.

Then Maria Grace told Lauriel that she could go first.

"Two agents kidnapped me," Lauriel began. "Apparently they were Dr Kozak's sons- agent Marcel and Tyrese. Long story short, Dr Kozak was originally supposed to be my father but my mum divorced him a long time ago, before I was born even. What about you?"

Maria Grace didn't reply straight away of course. Firstly she checked her watch, before checking the time left until the Perilous Obstacle Course test was over.

"Long story that you probably wouldn't have time for because the girls in there only have a minute until their time is up, so they've used up nine minutes."

The test probably couldn't be described any more simple than that.
Take the test.
You had ten minutes to complete all eight sections.
If you couldn't do it then you died.

Lauriel found herself not replying, and obviously Maria Grace was worried so she said something else.

"Although quick question. How do you know Dr Kozak? Sorry. I forgot. I think I have amnesia or something. He was my primary school teacher. What about you?"

Lauriel explained how she knew him, then talked about agent Astera for a while as his wife.

Maria Grace didn't know her, as she claimed another agent named agent Valentina took her here- plus apparently she was so hostile that she wanted Maria Grace to die in this test.

"You know we don't have to do this test by ourselves right? According to Dr Kozak's rules, we can do this test in pairs or threes. No more than that."

"So what are you trying to imply?" Lauriel asked her stupidly, drinking the orange flavoured Capri Sun.

It was better cold but it wasn't cold... oh well.

"We can work as a pair. Actually no. A three. My cousin Anastasia's here. Anastasia!"

Lauriel had judged Anastasia before she had even met her. According to her number, she was number sixty three. Lauriel really didn't get the point of these number tags?

It wasn't going to be the age she was going to die, was it?
So what was the point of them?

Lauriel intently watched Anastasia come towards her and Maria Grace where her judgmental attitude started kicking in.

Anastasia was wearing pretty much what agent Astera was wearing.... Except in fuchsia.

Her hair was the same as Vanessa's, except shorter and her eyes were the same as Kieran's, except more brown than hazel.

Oh yeah.
And the freckles.
Man, they were everywhere on Anastasia's face.

She was wearing sunglasses for some reason- either she was blind or she thought that she would look cooler wearing them.

Wow I already don't like her, Lauriel thought, before Anastasia even had the chance to actually say anything.

"Hey," she whispered, looking right through Lauriel. She then had to ask Maria Grace who Lauriel was, where Maria Grace introduced Lauriel to Anastasia and vice versa.

Lauriel looked at her spitefully, even though Anastasia was full on smiling at her.

A real smile.

Not the fake ones she received from people when they wanted something from her, a real, genuine smile.

"Oh my gosh you're so pretty!" Anastasia squealed, jumping up and down when she saw Lauriel. "Your hairstyle is so cute. And I love your fashion sense. Purple looks really good on you."

Lauriel wasn't convinced. Maria Grace probably forced Anastasia to be nice to her, but she wasn't buying it.

"Are you being sarcastic?" Lauriel shouted at her, where Anastasia shook her head.

"No sarcasm here, miss." Anastasia admitted truthfully, grimacing even more at Lauriel. "I genuinely like your fashion sense. I think it's really cool."

"Riiiiight..."
Lauriel was still looking at her deceitfully, although she couldn't help but think:

Aw man. She's so nice. I can't dislike her.

Then, when she was talking to Maria Grace about something:

She's probably even prettier than Vanessa to be honest. Who I don't really like, for breaking up with and being hostile to one of my best mates Kieran.

Lauriel was cautiously watching Anastasia's every move to see if she'd do anything wrong or peculiar but that never happened.

She also thought that Anastasia was going to be nice to her the first time until five minutes later and then bam! Instant rudeness.

Although that never really happened either, much to Lauriel's irritation.

Lauriel soon became fed up of watching Anastasia. Her perfectness made Lauriel personally wanted to die inside because no one was this sweet to everyone, ever.

Seriously, what did Anastasia have that she didn't?

Lauriel was so jealous of her.

Even worse for Lauriel: Anastasia was talking to Maria Grace about something until once again, she did something that made her perfectness level intensify completely.

Oh my god. And she recycles? There is genuinely no hating in that girl.

Anastasia kindly included Lauriel in her and Maria Grace's conversation once again, albeit as Lauriel was about to say some thing, once again, something had to interrupt her.

Someone actually.
It was the invigilator for the test, calling out the register names, to ensure that every girl who was supposed to take the test was here, ready to die.

"...I mean survive," the invigilator added rapidly, realising that every girl was now staring at her confusingly, Lauriel included.

She called out the people by their first names rather than name tags, as she felt like it would have been more convenient, which it was.

"I want you to say 'here' when I call your name. Understand?" No one replied. "Good."

She was taking what seemed like forever to get to Lauriel's name, even though she was 27th on the list, plus the register wasn't even in alphabetical order.

"Anastasia." She called.

"Here!"

"Maria Grace." She called again.

"Here!"

"Lauriel."

"I really don't know what I'm doing." She trailed off. "Here."

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Moral of chapter: Again, judge others and you will be judged as well.

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