Secret Agent, Counterspy (𝑪�...

By sereniity-

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Completed December 2017. Highest ranking #9 in Mystery/Thriller! Mature topics: suicide & self harm. ••••••... More

Chapter 1- Vanessasarily In Love
Chapter 2- Ice Hockey Match
Chapter 3- Kieran Outraged
Chapter 4- The Art Competition
Chapter 5- Theo And Leo
Chapter 6- Clyde's Jealous
Chapter 7- The Wedding!
Chapter 8- What On Earth Is She Doing Here?
Chapter 10- A Whirlwind Of Calamities
Chapter 11- Tornado, Tornado
Chapter 12- Secrets About Vanessa
Chapter 13- Scrapbook
Chapter 14- Don't Do It, Clyde
Chapter 15- Mad At Vanessa!
Chapter 16- New Girl, Lauriel
Chapter 17- Just Leave Kieran Alone, For God Sake!
Chapter 18- Kieran Gone Crazy
Chapter 19- Katherine Gone Crazy
Chapter 20- Winding Kieran Up
Chapter 21- Slime, Slime, Slime
Chapter 22- Vanessa On Kieran's Nerves
Chapter 23- Lauriel
Chapter 24- Lauriel Runs Away
Chapter 25- Annoying Text Messages!
Chapter 26- What Happens Next?
Chapter 27- Doctor, Doctor
Chapter 28- Leave And You Die, Lauriel
Chapter 29- Shouldn't Have Signed The Contract!
Chapter 30- Agent Astera
Chapter 31- "You Wasted Our Hologram Credits Just To Say Hi?!"
Chapter 32- Fail And You Die
Chapter 33- Lauriel's Doomed
Chapter 34- Wrong Test Room, Lauriel
Chapter 35- Just Don't Take The Test, Lauriel
Chapter 36- The Perilous Obstacle Course Test
Chapter 37- Oh No, They Didn't
Chapter 38- Win, Lose Or Cheat?
Chapter 39- World War Three
Chapter 40- Marcel And Tyrese Back At It Again
Chapter 41- Jeez, Marcel And Tyrese, What Have You Done To Kieran?
Chapter 42- Spider Mania 2
Chapter 43- Kieran's Predicament
Chapter 44- Wrong Test Room, Kieran...
Chapter 45- The Test Of Justice
Chapter 46- The Test Of "Justice"
Chapter 47- The Knife That Killed Me
Chapter 48- Kozak Gone Evil [1]
Chapter 49- Kozak Gone Evil [2]
Chapter 50- Secret Agent, Counterspy
Chapter 51- Well, Hello There, Esperanza
Chapter 52- Get That Trophy!
Chapter 53- Best Believing, Looks Are Deceiving
Chapter 54- Diana Valentine
Chapter 55- What's Esperanza Up To Now?
Chapter 56- Esperanza Upset
Chapter 57- "Hidden" Secrets
Chapter 58- Kozak Out Of Control!
Chapter 59- Late For The Mission
Chapter 60- Never Trust Kieran And Esperanza
Chapter 61- Kozak's Annoyed
Chapter 62- The Trouble With Elephants
Chapter 63- Holographic Elephant
Chapter 64- Kozak Gone Slightly Insane
Chapter 65- "You're Jealous, Kieran"
Chapter 66- Secrets About Kozak
Chapter 67- Step Right Over & Watch Her Put It Down
Chapter 68- Rhyme Or Die?
Chapter 69- Why, Kozak, Why?
Chapter 70- 'Cause Baby, You're A Firework
Chapter 71- Beautiful Present
Chapter 72- Kozak Jinxes Esperanza On Her Birthday
Chapter 73- The Date
Chapter 74- 99 Problems And Counting
Chapter 75- The Tragedy Of...
Chapter 76- Mysterious But Real Truths
Chapter 77- Kozak Gone Evil Again
Chapter 78- Arista Outrages Kozak
Chapter 79- Falling, Appalling, Trouble Is Calling
Chapter 80- Do It Like A Brother, Do It Like A Dude
Chapter 81- You Have A Brain, Use It. Ring The Doorbell Before I Lose It
Chapter 82- Kozak And His Sister Fall Out
Chapter 83- More Secrets About Kozak
Chapter 84- Well, That Was Unnecessary & Totally Uncalled For!
Chapter 85- The Booby Trap
Chapter 86- "Hastalavista, Valentina"
Chapter 87- For Goodness Sake, Kozak, Just Forgive Arista! [1]
Chapter 88- For Goodness Sake, Kozak, Just Forgive Arista! [2]
Chapter 89- Missing Link
Chapter 90- Cynthia Rose To The Rescue!
Chapter 91- Speechless
Chapter 92- The Tragedy Of Dr Kozak
Chapter 93- There Arista Goes
Chapter 94- Cynthia Meets Kozak
Chapter 95- Cynthia Rescues Kozak
Chapter 96- Kozak Rescues Everybody Else
Chapter 97- Kozak Gone Evil Once Again!
Chapter 98- "Can You Keep A Secret? It's About Lauriel."
Chapter 99- Frantically Texting Kozak
Chapter 100- It's The Final Countdown [Part 1]
Chapter 101- It's The Final Countdown [ Part 2]
Chapter 102- You Can't Spell "Diana" Without The Word "Die"
Chapter 103- The Point Of No Return
Chapter 104- Sometimes, You've Just Gotta Make A Run For It
Chapter 105- Where's Arista Though?
Chapter 106- Good Girl Gone Bad, Really Bad
Chapter 107- Kozak In Serious Agony
Chapter 108- The Real Truth Behind Arista
Chapter 109- Miracles, Miracles, Miracles!
Chapter 110- Even More Secrets About Kozak
Chapter 111- Expect The Unexpected [1]
Chapter 112- Expect The Unexpected [2]
Chapter 113- The Third Wheel
Chapter 114- The Massive Rhyming Argument Between...
Chapter 115- Where's A Doctor When You Need One?
Chapter 116- You've Just Gotten Yourself Into So Much Trouble, Kieran
Chapter 117- Martinez And Cynthia Back Again
Chapter 118- Why Esperanza Hates Cynthia Rose
Chapter 119- To Join Or Not To Join, That Is The Question
Chapter 120- A Rather Unexpected Visitor...
Chapter 121- Maria, Maria, Maria, Maria, Maria
Chapter 122- "Kieran Is Crazy, Dr Kozak! C-R-A-Z-Y!"
Chapter 123- Esperanza's Surprise Birthday Party
Chapter 124- What Maria Grace Wants, Maria Grace Gets
Chapter 125- Kozak's Gone Depressed Again
Chapter 126- Million Dollar Birthday Present
Chapter 127- Sorry Doesn't Push It, Kieran
Chapter 128- Today's A Gift, So It's Called The Present
Epilogue: A Happy Ending.... For Most People Anyway
End Of Book

Chapter 9- The Good, The Bad, The Ugly...

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Inspirational quote: You're beautiful when you frown but even more beautiful when you smile. Which is exactly why you need to do it a lot (smiling).

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Kieran was utterly speechless.
"Vv...Vvvvv...Vannnn....Vaness..."

Vanessa stared at him, but not like he was an idiot, because she was smiling, for some unknown reason.

"Trying to say my name?" She guessed, raising an eyebrow at him and then laughing hysterically.

Kieran cleared his throat, before turning red and staring at Vanessa's face.

"I just can't believe I'm finally talking to you!" Kieran hollered, coming up closer to Vanessa.

The most surreal thing was, Vanessa wasn't backing away from him, because for some reason she found the whole thing cute.

Kieran pinched himself when Vanessa wasn't properly looking.

This was not a dream, this was seriously real!

"I am talking to you in the flesh, right?" Kieran asked Vanessa, coming up even closer to her than last time; Vanessa didn't seem to mind at all.

"You're not a spirit or anything?" He stopped circling around her and looked at her for a long, long time.

Vanessa just burst out laughing.

"You're a weird kid, but I tell you, Kieran: all the best people are. And of course you're talking to me in the flesh. I'm not dead yet to be a spirit," she added, grinning complacently to herself.

Wow. She's nice and pretty? There's just no hating in that girl. Kieran thought internally to himself.

Kieran changed the subject completely as they made their way to the food hall where the wedding cake was currently being cut.

"So, what brings ya here? This wedding is only mainly for family members and friends."

Vanessa didn't reply, she just frowned at that.

"You're making it sound like me being here is a bad thing... Or that you don't want me here. I was walking with my mum to town but then we came across this wedding, and I go to this church. So we just went in, having absolutely no clue what was going on and who was getting married. But this is my church so I figured why not?"

Kieran didn't reply, as his mouth was stuffed with wedding cake.

"Huh? What? No. I would never mean that. I was just kinda surprised that you showed up because I really wasn't expecting you to be here," he told her, throwing the rest of the cake away once he found out that it contained strawberries and Kieran was allergic.

Vanessa didn't say anything, she didn't want to embarrass herself in front of Kieran.

There was an awkward silence between them as Vanessa finally thought of something to say.

"I know you like me, Kieran. That's why I stayed behind to talk to you. Also I wanted to apologise, I caught you staring at me all love struck which was why people kept on laughing at you when you dropped the flowers. And I heard your stepfather yell at you as well, and I'm guessing it was my fault. If you hadn't seen me, then none of this would have happened, and I'm sorry about that."

Kieran was absolutely and utterly gobsmacked. He didn't know what to say.

Now everyone knew he had a crush on Vanessa, including Vanessa.

He didn't want to tell her until they were ninety or something.

"Oh wow, you're so nice, I don't know what to say," Kieran replied, startled. "Thanks for your apology. The day I first saw you I couldn't stop thinking about you. You're just so beautiful, Vanessa, and any guy would be lucky to have you."

Vanessa hugged Kieran next, telling him that that was the nicest thing that anyone had ever said to him.

Moreover, she admitted she kind of felt the same way about Kieran as well (as in, more than just liking him) however just didn't make it as obvious as he did with her.

The events following Kieran and Vanessa's first ever conversation were a bit decent, however this didn't last for long.

As soon as they were all having a party due to the marriage of Kieran's stepfather and Katherine, he didn't know how to refer to her yet, Kieran was almost sure that he could hear a gunshot sound.

He wasn't a hundred percent sure if he was the only person that had actually heard it, but once he heard it again, he knew that there was something going on.

He went up from his table to his father's table, where a bunch of adults were talking albeit as soon as Kieran came to the table they all decided to stop.

"Dad... Dad?" Kieran kept on frequently tapping him. His stepfather just ignored him, mainly because Kieran had already irritated him enough times today, but he had to get his stepfather's attention.

"Dad, look, I'm sorry. But I think that something is going on outside, I just heard a gunshot sound."

His father rolled his eyes at him in disbelief.

"Please, Kieran, stop lying. And like I'd be naive or gullible enough to believe something like that."

Kieran didn't reply, that was when he heard the gunshot again.

No one had heard it except him, by the looks of things, however when there was a louder sound that was when his stepfather finally believed him.

Gunshot!
Followed by a few others as well.
Gunshot gunshot gunshot!

"Think I'm lying now?" Kieran  bellowed at his stepfather. "Or do you finally believe me?"

His father couldn't respond, so he didn't. Moments later, a terrorist seemed to have somehow entered the chapel, placing suicide bombs everywhere.

Screaming as well and running around helter skelter proceeded that, and just a few seconds later, more terrorists, about ten of them, came inside.

"Kieran! Why are you just standing there? Do you want to die?"

Kieran did want to die, and now was his chance to. Although what he saw next traumatised Kieran's life forever.

People was frantically screaming now, there was no escape. No matter which way anyone went, terrorists were everywhere.

If someone went left, abracadabra! Terrorist.

If someone went right, abracadabra! Terrorist.

The whole chapel was filled with them straight afterwards, and the traumatising thing that Kieran had seen followed straight afterwards.

He had witnessed a terrorist strangling someone. Just then, they got out a knife, before maliciously beheading the person, and then the person died.

Kieran would have helped them, and he should have as well.

Although he didn't want his life at danger so surreptitiously watching everything happening live was the only thing he could do.

Kieran was one of the first people to leave the food hall of the chapel, and moments later he found himself where everyone else was, the room where the wedding was taking place.

Until he found himself in a sticky situation as well.

Under one table, were his family, beckoning Kieran  to come  over so that he didn't have to stand there on his own.

Opposite that table was a cupboard, which was where Vanessa seemed to be hiding.

So here was the problem.
Did he hide under a table with his family, who was more important than anyone else?

Or Vanessa, who Kieran had been trying to get to talk to him since the first day he saw her?

Think Kieran, Kieran thought to himself. You haven't got much time left to live.

Family?
Vanessa?
Family?
Vanessa?
Family?
Vanessa?

After a lengthy, tricky decision with himself, Kieran decided to go off with Vanessa.

This was mainly because, a) she was too kind for Kieran to leave behind suffering all by herself, b) she was alone, his family members were not and c) there were about five people in Kieran's family (excluding Kieran) and one table, whereas if he went with Vanessa there was a lesser chance of him becoming claustrophobic and more space for both of them to hide.

When the terrorists weren't looking, although people were still caterwauling everywhere, Kieran secretly sneaked off to the cupboard, opened it and saw Vanessa, then closed it again.

"You okay?" She wanted to know, staring at him, and Kieran could see his face through her sunglasses, which was strange because she wasn't wearing them before.

"Yeah. You?" Kieran whispered back.

But Vanessa didn't reply.

"And what's with the sunglasses?" Kieran wanted to know.

Vanessa didn't reply again.
Instead she sighed gravely, before removing it and covering one eye.

When Vanessa  finally took her hand off of her eye, Kieran screamed, not believing what he had just seen.

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Moral of chapter: The personality of some people can utterly surprise you!

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