Miraculous Rewrite

By pmccall2

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A rewrite by me of the popular show 'Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug and Cat Noir'. This is my version of what M... More

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Coccinelle and Chat Noir: Origins, Pt 1
Stoneheart: Origins, Pt 2
Stormy Weather
The Bubbler
The Pharaoh
Lady Wifi
Timebreaker
Mr. Pigeon
The Evillustrator
Rogercop
Copycat
Dark Cupid
Horrificator
Darkblade
The Mime
Kung Food
Gamer
Animan
Vanisher
The Puppeteer
Reflekta
Guitar Villain
Pixelator
Princess Fragrance
Simon Says
Volpina
Season 2 News
The Collector
Christmas Special/Santa Claws
Despair Bear
Prime Queen
Befana
Riposte
Robostus
Gigantitan
The Dark Owl
Glaciator
Sapotis
Gorizilla
Captain Hardrock
Zombizou
Syren
Frightningale
Anansi
Sandboy
Reverser
Frozer
Style Queen: Queen's Battle, Pt 1
Queen Wasp: Queen's Battle, Pt 2
Malediktator
Troublemaker
Princess Justice: Heroes' Day, Pt 1
Mayura: Heroes' Day, Pt 2
Miraculous World: Shanghai
Season 3 News
Backwarder
Weredad
Chameleon
Animaestro
Bakerix
Silencer
Oblivio
Stormy Weather 2
Reflekdoll
Oni-Chan
Miraculer
The Puppeteer 2
Desperada
Startrain
Kwamibuster
Feast
Ikari Gozen
Timetagger
Party Crasher
Gamer 2.0
Chat Blanc
Félix
Coccinelle
Christmaster
Heart Hunter: The Battle of the Miraculous, Pt 1
Miracle Queen: The Battle of the Miraculous, Pt 2
Miraculous World: New York
Season 4 News
Truth
Lies
Gang of Secrets
Furious Fu
Sole Crusher
Queen Banana
Guiltrip
Crocoduel
Optigami
Sentibubbler
Rocketear
Mega Leech
Wishmaker
Hack-San
Princess Justice 2
Glaciator 2
Dearest Family
Ephemeral
Gabriel Agreste
Psycomedian
Kuro Neko
Penalteam
Qilin
Risk: Shadow Moth's Final Attack, Pt 1
Strikeback: Shadow Moth's Final Attack, Pt 2
Season 5 News
Evolution
Multiplication
Destruction
Miraculous World: Paris
Jubilation
Determination
Passion
Reunion
Illusion
Elation
Transmission: The Kwamis' Choice, Pt 1
Deflagration: The Kwamis' Choice, Pt 2
Perfection
Migration
Derision
Intuition
Protection
Adoration
Emotion
Action
Pretension
Revelation
Confrontation
Collusion
Revolution
Representation
Conformation: The Final Day, Pt 1
Re-Creation: The Final Day, Pt 2

Mr. Pigeon 72

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By pmccall2

Scene: Luka's Room. Coccinelle and Juleka are experimenting.

Coccinelle: Sure, it's amazing being Coccinelle. I've got these powers, kwamis, but can you imagine if we could prevent Shadow Moth from creating villains in the first place?
Juleka: He'd be ruined!
Coccinelle: Exactly. Have you noticed that Shadow Moth seems to reakumatize people much more often these days? He gets to know his victims and figures out how to manipulate them better!
Juleka: You're right. I've been akumatized into Reflekta multiple times.
Coccinelle: Don't worry; I've got your back, sis.
Juleka: (notices the large amount of times Xavier Ramier has been akumatized) Woah! Mr. Pigeon has already been akumatized 71 times?!
Coccinelle: He's just a harmless guy trying to take care of his pigeons; It's not fair. I'd promised him I'd find a way to keep him safe from Shadow Moth, but I just can't figure it out. (He groans) I don't understand a thing in this spell book!
Wayzz: Master Fu didn't understand much in it either, but he was able to do it with proper time and rest!
Coccinelle: You're probably right, Wayzz, but I think I'm getting close; I can't stop now. (He spinkles some pepper into the pot, causing an explosion) Darn it, I was sure that "spicy little rock" would be pepper.
Trixx: Juleka, could you help us out here?
Juleka: Luka, how long have you been working on this?
Coccinelle: Since I told you, I suppose. Now that we're on spring break, I finally have some more time to figure things out.
Juleka: When was the last time you worked on one of your songs?
Coccinelle: Uh... not long ago. I can handle both, you know.
Juleka: (sighs) Luka, you need a break. Why don't you stop and come back later with a fresh mindset?
Coccinelle: I'm this close, Jules! I'll take a break soon. Right now, I have to figure out how to keep Shadow Moth from reakumatizing people. (He opens a jar and pours the contents into the pot, causing another explosion)
Juleka: I get that you wanna see the end of Shadow Moth, but you shouldn't run yourself ragged.
Coccinelle: I won't, Jules. Promise.
(Suddenly, Luka's phone rings. Coccinelle picks it up and answers)
Coccinelle: Adrien?
Adrien: Luka! Are you busy right now?
Coccinelle: Oh, not really. What is it?
Adrien: My father wants me to star in a commercial for his new ad campaign at the pool today. Did you want to come with me?
Coccinelle: I'd love to, but will it be ok with your father? I wouldn't want to intrude.
Adrien: He's not going to be there in person anyway. Besides, it gives us an excuse to spend some time together!
Coccinelle: Alright, babe. I'll see you there?
Adrien: See you soon.
(They hang up, and Coccinelle turns to his sister)
Juleka: (teasingly) You're "not really" busy? What happened to not stopping until you figured all this out?
Coccinelle: Oh come on, he's my boyfriend, and he doesn't get much freedom. You know you'd drop everything too if you got to do something with Rose.
Juleka: Yeah, yeah, just go have fun. And Luka?
Coccinelle: Yeah?
(Juleka gestures to him, pointing out that he's still transformed)
Coccinelle: Oh, right. Spots off!
(He detransforms and heads out the door)
Luka: Seeya, sis!
(Juleka rolls her eyes fondly, before moving to look at the work Coccinelle has been doing)

Scene: Outside the pool. Luka and Adrien greet each other before heading inside. Unbeknownst to them, Marinette watches them from nearby.

Marinette: (to herself) Alright, Adrien is at the pool, getting ready to shoot his next big ad campaign! It's the perfect place for us to make up! Good thing I know Adrien's schedule for the next three years by heart. But they've closed the pool to rehearse the commercial in private. How will I get in? Oh! I know! (She snaps a picture and makes a post, giggling mischievously)
Wayhem: Adrien's at the pool! There!
(Several more of Adrien's fans suddenly show up, trying to get inside to see him. While the bodyguard is preoccupied with the crazed fans, Marinette manages to sneak her way in)

Scene: Changing room at the swimming pool. Plagg hovers in the air and faces Adrien.

Plagg: I'm gonna have to break it to ya 'cause I'm the only one who can. This is totally insane!! Jumping into freezing water first thing in the morning when we could be peacefully eating cheese?
(Adrien opens his pool bag, revealing that it is filled with Camembert. Plagg gasps and happily dives in)
Plagg: I take back everything I said! Everything is great! Just great!

Scene: Swimming pool. Bob Roth talks to Gabriel Agreste via video call.

Bob Roth: Okay, now picture it, Gabe. Adrien is on top of the Eiffel Tower, bathed in sunlight. He jumps off, in slow motion. Doves flutter all around him as if his fall would never end. The catchphrase, "dive into romantic, magical, eternal Paris!" And then splash! Right into a giant glass of sparkling golden juice! Backshot! "Splash, the new fragrance by Gabriel."
Gabriel: (on tablet) Those birds are not doves, they're pigeons.
Bob Roth: Not at all! They're doves!
Mr. Ramier: My birds aren't do-
Bob Roth: Listen Ramier, I know those are pigeons but it is in both of our best interests if Agreste believes they're doves! Mine, because he's paying me a lot of money. And yours, because I can convince the mayor to create a space specifically dedicated to pigeons in Paris. So, for today, your pigeons are doves! Got it? Okay everybody, places! Action!
(Adrien goes to the diving board. Luka gives him a thumbs up, and he dives into the pool as he is surrounded by pigeons)
Gabriel: Something... is missing. We've got "magical Paris" and "eternal Paris" but we're missing "romantic Paris." A red rose! I want one of these doves to bring a rose in mid-flight to my son. He'll take it between his teeth before he enters the water. Then it will be perfect!
(Mr. Ramier sounds his bird call and one of the pigeons immediately flies over to his suitcase and takes a rose; then flies onto his shoulder)
Mr. Ramier: You can count on Edgar! No animal's more obedient than this sweet little pigeon.
Bob Roth: Dove! They're doves!
Adrien: Hang on, I'm allergic to pigeons. If they get too close-
Bob Roth: Nothing is gonna happen because they're doves!
Gabriel: I'll give you thirty minutes to set this all up. (He disconnects)
Bob Roth: You heard the man, Ramier. You better not let me down!

Scene: Changing room at the swimming pool.

Marinette: And now, time for camouflage! (She takes out a swimsuit and changes into it)

Scene: Swimming pool. Adrien is walking back to the diving board. Marinette is spying on him from nearby.

Bob Roth: Action!
(Adrien jumps off the diving board, but gets too close to Edgar, causing him to sneeze)
Adrien: Aah! (He falls into pool)
Luka: Adrien! (He runs over to him) Are you ok?
Bob Roth: Your pigeon isn't up for the job! He's not supposed to come back with the rose!
Mr. Ramier: The sneeze frightened him.
Adrien: I told you, I'm allergic to pigeons! (He sneezes again)

Scene: Third floor of the swimming pool.

Marinette: (sighs) He's so handsome... And the way he makes my heart flutter... Oh! I have an idea!

Scene: Swimming pool.

Bob Roth: Here, for your allergy to the doves. (He hands Adrien a nose clip)
(Adrien once again goes up to the diving board. He dives into the pool, but not before seeing Marinette approaching. Shocked to see her, Adrien splashes into the pool below)
Bob Roth: This cannot be happening. How complicated is it to deliver a rose in mid-flight to a model in mid-dive?
Luka: You ok? What happened?
Adrien: It's my fault. I- I thought I saw...
(Adrien, Luka, and Bob Roth look in the direction where Marinette was, but she has hidden somewhere else)
Bob Roth: Well, I don't see anyone, except a stupid bird that's incapable of doing what it's been asked to do and that's gonna get banned from all of Paris, if it continues to ruin the rehearsals for my commercial!
Gabriel: (on tablet) Are you ready?
Bob Roth: Of course! (Looks angrily at Mr. Ramier)
Mr. Ramier: (To Edgar) Remember Edgar, if Mr. Roth is happy he will have a word with the mayor and pigeons will live in Paris happily ever after.
Bob Roth: Action!
(Mr. Ramier once again sounds the bird call. Just as Adrien is about to leap into the pool, the door behind him opens and Marinette comes through)
Marinette: Adrien!
Adrien: M-Marinette?!
(Marinette comes running towards Adrien, attempting to trap him in an embrace. She slams into him, causing them both to fall off the diving board. On their way down, they jump into Edgar, who also crashes into the pool)
Mr. Ramier: Edgar!
(Mr. Ramier tries to resuscitate Edgar as Marinette and Adrien get out of the pool. Luka helps Adrien out and holds him close)
Luka: Marinette, what on Earth are you doing here?!
Marinette: Me? Well um- I just came here to do a few laps and wind you up- I mean, unwind... How about you?
Adrien: The pool is supposed to be closed for the commercial shoot; how did you even get in here?!
Marinette: Oh well, that's why there was no one at the front desk. Oh boy, I wouldn't want to kiss you- I mean, keep you, keep you from your job. So how about we do something together afterwards?
Adrien: Are you crazy?! I've told you a million times that I want nothing to do with you!
Luka: You'd better get out of here before we decide to call the cops on you!
(Marinette trips into a stack of crates, causing everything in them to fall out as she flees the scene)
Gabriel: (on tablet) This is a complete failure, Robert!
Bob Roth: It's not my fault, it's his fault!
Mr. Ramier: How dare you?! Edgar is my best friend, the most intelligent and loyal pigeon there ever was!
Gabriel: So, it is a pigeon!
Bob Roth: What?! This is a pigeon?! Ramier, how dare you cheat me out of the real thing?! So sorry, Gabriel, I'm gonna find a replacement immediately! I know a very good shark trainer!
Gabriel: Do not disappoint me again.
(Uninterested, Gabriel coldly cuts the connection, which surprises Bob)

Scene: Agreste Mansion.

Gabriel: This commercial is turning into a fiasco, but maybe we can salvage something beneficial from it after all, my love. (He enters his lair)

Scene: Swimming pool. Bob Roth yells at Mr. Ramier.

Bob Roth: You get out of my pool! You're fired!
Mr. Ramier: But you were supposed to have a word with the mayor!
Bob Roth: You know what? I'm going to tell the mayor to ban those flying rats and tamers like you, now and forever! GET OUT!
(Deeply hurt, Mr. Ramier leaves the pool sadly, along with Edgar)
Luka: No, wait!
Adrien: Mr. Ramier...
Mr. Ramier: (sadly) I failed.

Scene: Shadow Moth's lair.

Shadow Moth: I sense that this time, Mr. Ramier's distress has reached new depths. Fly my lovely akuma, and evilize his unhinged heart!

Scene: Outside the swimming pool. The akuma enters Mr. Ramier's bird call whistle.

Shadow Moth: Mr. Pigeon, I am Shadow Moth. Since humans and pigeons cannot live together in harmony...
Mr. Ramier: I will turn every human into a pigeon!
(Mr. Ramier is re-akumatized into Mr. Pigeon for the 72nd time. Once the transformation is complete, he sounds his bird call, causing all of the pigeons to be turned from medium gray to very dark gray)
Shadow Moth: (voiceover) What would Paris be without its pigeons, and without Mr. Pigeon?
Mr. Pigeon: From now on, everyone will have to accept us my friends because everyone will be just like us!
(The pigeons start turning other people into pigeons)

Scene: Inside the swimming pool. Luka comforts Adrien.

Luka: Adrien, are you ok?
Adrien: I- yeah, I just- wasn't expecting to see her...
Luka: Did you get hurt when you fell?
Adrien: I don't think so... It's just- having her hold onto me like that... It was a terrible feeling. I felt like I was trapped...
Luka: Don't worry, we'll make sure it never happens again, babe.
Adrien: Thank you, Luka. I love you.
Luka: I love you too.
(The two are about to lean in for a kiss, when dozens of pigeons fly in)
Adrien: What?
Luka: Looks like poor Mr. Ramier got akumatized again; we'd better get out of here and transform.
Adrien: Plagg's with all my stuff in the changing room; I need to get to him!
(Adrien grabs Luka and the two start running towards the changing room, hand in hand. They almost make it, but Adrien sneezes due to all the pigeons. As his hand separates from Luka's, a pigeon is able to strike him)
Luka: ADRIEN! NO!
(Dodging the pigeons, Luka shuts himself in the nearest changing room)

Scene: Changing room at the swimming pool. Luka talks to Tikki.

Luka: What do we do, Tikki? Adrien's been turned into a pigeon!
Tikki: You'll have to transform to save him!
Luka: But what about Chat Noir? I can't do this without him!
Plagg: (flies through the wall) Kid, we've got a problem!
Luka: I know, Plagg. What should I do?
Plagg: I say transform! See if that Lucky Charm of yours can help us out!
Luka: Alright. Tikki, spots on! Lucky Charm! (He receives a hand drill)
Plagg: A hand drill? No offense, but I don't think you'll get out of here with such a tiny hole!
(Coccinelle thinks on how to get out, and thinks of Plagg, his yo-yo, a ball in the pool, his sister, and the hand drill)
Coccinelle: Who said anything about getting out?

Scene: Luka and Juleka's room. Juleka looks over the Grimoire and makes a discovery.

Juleka: Of course, the answer was right under my nose from the very beginning!
(She notices the pigeons outside)
Fluff: This is not normal! No it isn't, we'll never know!
Nadja Chamack: (news report on Juleka's phone) Mr. Pigeon is back for the 72nd time, and now he's transforming Parisians- (She gets turned into a pigeon)
(Juleka's phone rings. She answers the phone)
Juleka: Coccinelle?

Scene: Changing room at the swimming pool.

Coccinelle: I'm stuck at the pool!
Juleka: What should I do?
Coccinelle: It's too dangerous to be out in Paris right now! Chat Noir has already been transformed into a pigeon! I need Coccinelle and Chat Noir to lure Mr. Pigeon back here!
Juleka: Got it! (She opens the Miracle Box and takes the Fox Miraculous) Coccinelle needs us.

[Transformation Sequence]

Juleka: Trixx, let's pounce! (Juleka transforms into Foxglove)

Foxglove: Mirage!

Scene: Parisian rooftops. An illusion of Coccinelle and Chat Noir are created.

Scene: Luka and Juleka's room.

Foxglove: Your illusions are on their way.
Coccinelle: Thanks, sis.

Scene: The streets of Paris. André Bourgeois and 2 men are turned into pigeons.

Mr. Pigeon: No need for the mayor's permission to turn Paris into a pigeon paradise when the mayor himself is a pigeon!
Shadow Moth: (from his lair) Don't forget that there are other evil animals in Paris ready to put a stop to your power!
Mr. Pigeon: Coccinelle, Chat Noir, give yourselves up or else I'll spread my wings even farther. So far, that the entire world will become pigeons! (He sends out multiple pigeon airplanes)
Chat Noir Illusion: If I were you, I'd rather transform people into kittens. Everyone likes kittens better!
Coccinelle Illusion: Or into ladybugs. At least they bring good luck!

Scene: Changing room at the swimming pool.

Coccinelle: I couldn't have said it better! Nice work, Foxglove!

Scene: Parisian rooftops.

Mr. Pigeon: Oh yes, ladybugs make an excellent snack. For pigeons!
Coccinelle Illusion: Sure, but you gotta catch them first!
(Mr. Pigeon begins to chase the illusions as they run to the pool)

Scene: Changing room at the swimming pool.

Coccinelle: Be careful, if they touch the illusions they'll disappear.
Foxglove: Yeah, don't worry, here they come.
Coccinelle: Plagg, you're up!
Plagg: Ugh, I hate water. And pigeons! Too bad Chat Noir isn't here to do this instead of me. (He phases through the wall and hides in a ball in the pool)

Scene: Swimming pool. The illusions are running from Mr. Pigeon and his pigeons.

Mr. Pigeon: (laughs) Jewels are forbidden in the pool, Coccinelle!

Scene: Changing room at the swimming pool.

Coccinelle: It's time, Foxglove!

Scene: Swimming pool.

Chat Noir Illusion: I'm afraid this time we don't have a choice, M'Bug.
Coccinelle Illusion: I guess it's time to throw in the towel, kitty cat.
(The illusions take off their miraculouses, revealing two random boys)
Shadow Moth: (from his lair) Finally!

Scene: Changing room at the swimming pool.

Coccinelle: Now!

Scene: Swimming pool.

Both illusions: Take them if you can!
(The illusions throw their miraculous into the pool)
Mr. Pigeon: Pigeons might not like water, but I do! (He dives into the water, but Plagg appears and snatches his bird call)
Shadow Moth: (from his lair) NOOOOO!
Mr. Pigeon: My bird call!

Scene: Changing room at the swimming pool. Coccinelle drills a hole in the wall, allowing Plagg to fly through with the bird call, and a pigeon gets stuck in the hole.

Plagg: There you go!
(Coccinelle destroys the bird call)
Coccinelle: No more evil doing for you little akuma! Time to de-evilize! Gotcha! Bye bye little butterfly! Miraculous Coccinelle! (He turns everyone back to normal)

Scene: Shadow Moth's lair.

Shadow Moth: Have fun with your little magic tricks, Coccinelle. One day, I will crush you and that won't be an illusion!

Scene: Swimming pool. Adrien is turned back into himself. Coccinelle runs out of the changing room to greet him.

Coccinelle: Adrien! (He wraps him in an embrace) I'm so glad you're ok!
Plagg: Happy to see you again, Adrien. So, still allergic to pigeons?
(A feather lands on Adrien's shoulder, and he sneezes)
Adrien: Just as always, Plagg... And don't worry, Luka, I'm fine.
(Mr. Pigeon de-transforms back into Mr. Ramier. Coccinelle approaches him)
Mr. Ramier: Oh no, I was the victim of Shadow Moth again, wasn't I!?
Coccinelle: I wish I could tell you it would be the last time, Mr. Ramier. But that's a miracle I cannot perform.
(Foxglove arrives, with a paper in hand)
Foxglove: Don't be so sure!
Coccinelle: Foxglove?
Foxglove: You've been so focused on your role as a guardian that you've forgotten you're still Coccinelle!
Coccinelle: You found something in the spellbook?
Foxglove: No, there was nothing to find! What if the rules in the spellbooks are not a finite set of existing rules, but only what the guardians had learned about the miraculous so far?
Coccinelle: Which means if my power is the power of creation...
Foxglove: Yes, create. Your only limits are the ones you put on yourself.
(Coccinelle then expands his limits and creates a magical charm)
Foxglove: Wow, what's that?
Coccinelle: It's a... magical charm. Mr. Ramier, always keep this with you. It will protect you from negative emotions.
Mr. Ramier: Oh, does this mean that Shadow Moth won't be able to akumatize me anymore? (To the pigeons) Oh, do you hear that my friends? We will never be Paris's villains again! (He happily runs off, and the pigeons fly off with him)
Coccinelle and Foxglove: Pound it!
Adrien: (lovingly) He truly is Miraculous.

THE END

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