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I. Title: Through The Window
Easier title, easy to digest. What I like about this is that since it leaves a sort of questioning theme, it allows you to move anywhere with it. As I notice that the story is supposed to be made for a more horror element, I really think this title fits!
II. Cover
Uhmmm... I am not a fan of the cover. I really think it is the fonts in the cover that is throwing me off but it feels quite outdated. I like that the title and the author's name are clear to see, but the subtitle is so hard to see. Plus, I am not a huge fan of that font you were using with the cover. Overall, I just feel the cover is outdated and not fully able to capture the ideas you were going for. I do recommend if you want to expand the story, try to seek a graphic designer or remaking the cover yourself to get the right audience on board.
