Shooting Star (CLO)

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Title: Shooting Stars

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Title: Shooting Stars

Author: ISHA ( ishaa_90 )

Genre: Humor

Chapters Reviewed: Chapter 1-2

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I. Title: Shooting Stars

A mystical title that holds many opportunities and capabilities. What I like about it is that you never have to feel restricted based on genre since it could be contemporary, sci-fi, fantasy, romance, etc. I will mention that though I like the title, it is not a mind-blowing title. Like I have seen this done before, not extremely common but not uncommon if you get what I mean. Other than this little random note, the title is simple yet not boring!


II. Cover

A lot is going in this cover, but at the same time... not a lot. Like here is the thing, I am loving that font you or the cover designer used for "Shooting", but I really wish you continued it with the "Stars" since it would have been a lot more cohesive and not bringing a crazy amount of attention to one area which for me, is the "Stars" since it is so bright. My suggestion would have been to keep the title on the top half, and then in the bottom where the ground is to have just your name in a bigger and more clarified style with the cover designer below your name. It would make it easier to look at since having that many words in the middle is quite off-putting.

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