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I. Title: My Sweet Tooth VS Their Craving For Flesh
Quite a lengthy title. Is it unique? Very much so! But can it be a handful? Up to you to decide. It does tell a more lighthearted story that will also be darker due to the "Craving For Flesh" part. To be honest, I am not sure how I feel about the title. This isn't a bad thing or good thing; I am just feeling neutral about it. Not sure if you could try to make the title shorter since for cover purposes, it can be lengthy. Up to you though, not forcing you to do anything with this as it is your work.
II. Cover
I will be completely honest since I am a brutal reviewer, I am not a fan of the cover. I understand the title is quite extensive so you will need to have a text-based cover, but I feel the fonts and the different colors are making it seem too messy. Again, I know it is hard with the title quantity, but to have basically 6-8 different fonts doesn't work. Sticking to 2-3 fonts would be perfect as it adds clarity and cleanliness to the cover. Additionally, I feel that overall, the cover seems outdated to me (like it doesn't feel cohesive at all). Overall, the cover is not the most appealing thing to look at, which is SUCH a crucial part in attracting readers. A suggestion I have is getting the cover done with a graphics shop as they will be able to understand your vision you have; but also, being able to ensure it comes out appealing to the eyes and grabbing viewership.
