The Do's and Don'ts of Writin...

By xxdelinquentxx

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For all you amateur writers on Wattpad that want to write a smashing book. Here are the top tips. There are f... More

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PLOT: Opening scene.
PLOT: How to plot
PLOT: Main characters
PLOT: Creating characters
PLOT: Build a Protagonist
PLOT: Antagonist
PLOT: Why is a good guy an antagonist
PLOT: The villain
PLOT: Chekov's friend rule
PLOT: Naming chapters
PLOT: Potential non-romantic/non-sexual B-plots
PLOT: Set the scene
PLOT: Introducing backstory
PLOT: Scenes
PLOT: If you're stuck in the middle of the scene
PLOT: How to switch things up
PLOT: Increasing tension
PLOT: Give scenes momentum
PLOT: Plot twist ideas
PLOT: Leaving holes
PLOT: 10 ways to punch your reader in the gut.
PLOT: How to end your story
PLOT: Story endings
LANGUAGE: Instant turn offs when reading
LANGUAGE: Paragraphs
LANGUAGE: Punctuation Pt. 1
LANGUAGE: Punctuation Pt. 2
LANGUAGE: Dashes
LANGUAGE: Show don't tell
LANGUAGE: Keep an eye on 'was'
LANGUAGE: Don't overuse the word "very"
LANGUAGE: That
LANGUAGE: Words instead of "whispered"
LANGUAGE: Words instead of...
LANGUAGE: Swearing
LANGUAGE: Stutter Pt. 1
LANGUAGE: Stutter Pt. 2
LANGUAGE: How children speak
LANGUAGE: Specifics
LANGUAGE: Re-write
HOW TO: Top 10 tips for actually writing
HOW TO: Writing exercises
HOW TO: World-building
HOW TO: Girls names
HOW TO: Boys names
HOW TO: Surnames
HOW TO: Character description
HOW TO: Character cliché's
HOW TO: Character personalities
HOW TO: Physical personality
HOW TO: Tropes I love and hate
HOW TO: Making representation obvious
HOW TO: Break the black girl stereotype
HOW TO: Writing blind characters
HOW TO: Writing deaf characters Pt. 1
HOW TO: Writing deaf characters Pt. 2
HOW TO: Coming-out scenes
HOW TO: Anxiety disorders
HOW TO: Social anxiety
HOW TO: Panic attacks
HOW TO: PTSD
HOW TO: ADHD characters
HOW TO: Not romanticising heavy topics
HOW TO: Glasses
HOW TO: How to describe eyes
HOW TO: Use of eyes
HOW TO: How to spot a liar
HOW TO: Body language that conveys embarrassment
HOW TO: Body language cheat sheet
HOW TO: Over-repetitive character actions
HOW TO: Helpful things for action writers to remember
HOW TO: Writing techniques for action writers
HOW TO: Interesting villains
HOW TO: Villain motive prompts
HOW TO: Anti-villain motivations
HOW TO: Lovable Villain
HOW TO: Heroes
HOW TO: Fun ways for characters to be wrong
HOW TO: How to blur the lines between good and evil
HOW TO: Character's that slowly descend into madness.
HOW TO: Light and dark
HOW TO: Stealth characters
HOW TO: Types of fight scenes
HOW TO: Guns
HOW TO: Gun terms
HOW TO: Injury
HOW TO: Where to hit in a fight
HOW TO: Writing pain
HOW TO: Writing blood loss
HOW TO: Malnourishment and dehydration
HOW TO: Drowning
HOW TO: Character collapsing
HOW TO: Modes of death
HOW TO: Killing characters
HOW TO: Sad character deaths
HOW TO: Mourning
HOW TO: Trauma leaves an impression
HOW TO: Murder terminology in layman's terms
HOW TO: Murder tips master post
HOW TO: Calming sentences
HOW TO: Creating romantic chemistry
HOW TO: Stages of attraction
HOW TO: Small, intimate moments
HOW TO: Tiny turn-ons
HOW TO: Non-sexual forms of intimacy
HOW TO: Important OTP things to consider
HOW TO: Imagine your OTP Pt. 1
HOW TO: Imagine your OTP Pt. 2
HOW TO: Types of kiss prompt's Pt. 1
HOW TO: Types of kiss prompt's Pt. 2
HOW TO: Best romantic cliché's
HOW TO: Reasons not to kiss them
HOW TO: Childhood best friends/friends to lovers trope
HOW TO: Relationships your readers will ship
HOW TO: Cool ways for men to be gender non-conforming
HOW TO: A list of attractive things to see/read a man doing
HOW TO: Under-represented gender character types
HOW TO: Bad boy vs. abuser
HOW TO: Possessiveness 101
HOW TO: Male characters
HOW TO: Female characters
HOW TO: Female character traits.
HOW TO: Women in History
HOW TO: Historical time periods
HOW TO: Medieval fact file
HOW TO: Historical marrying age
HOW TO: Royalty
HOW TO: Royal titles
HOW TO: Female court positions
HOW TO: Fantasy sub-genres
HOW TO: Fantasy world-building
HOW TO: Top 10 fantasy tropes
HOW TO: 12 things to ask about your magic system
HOW TO: Build a fantasy religion
HOW TO: Poisons
HOW TO: Pills and potions
HOW TO: Potential curse/hex ingredients
HOW TO: Magical tools/objects masterpost
HOW TO: Alchemical Substances
HOW TO: All purpose tools of witchcraft
HOW TO: Candle magic omens
HOW TO: Curses
HOW TO: Magic terminology
HOW TO: Latin phrases to use as incantations Pt. 1
HOW TO: Latin phrases to use as incantations Pt. 2
HOW TO: Hag Stones
HOW TO: Necrobotany
HOW TO: Magical universities
HOW TO: Urban city witch
HOW TO: Mages, healers and druids
HOW TO: Emotions through magic
HOW TO: The faerie star
HOW TO: Locations in Norse mythology
HOW TO: Kill a God
HOW TO: Dragons Pt.1
HOW TO: Dragons Pt.2
HOW TO: Wolves
HOW TO: Vampire's Pt. 1
HOW TO: Vampire's Pt. 2
HOW TO: Vampire's Pt. 3
HOW TO: Zombie ability
HOW TO: Supernatural concepts
HOW TO: A list of great comebacks
HOW TO: Iconic meme dialogue
HOW TO: Movie tropes I love
AU: Instead of coffeeshop AU
AU: Fam Jam AU's
AU: Being forced to share a bed AU
AU: Bed-sharing
AU: Obligatory AU's I really want
AU: AU's I really want to see written
AU: Meet ugly
AU: Arranged marriage AU prompts
AU: Soulmate AU prompts
AU: Fantasy AU prompt
AU: Time travel costume department
AU: Angels
AU: Domestic monsters
AU: Storm magic
AU: New England gothic
AU: Florida gothic
AU: Southern California gothic
AU: Texas gothic
AU: American public school gothic
AU: Mysterious little towns
AU: Random
WRITING PROMPT: 100 Prompts that will make you cry
WRITING PROMPT: Hurt/comfort dialogue prompts
WRITING PROMPT: 119 sarcastic prompts
WRITING PROMPT: 1 (PREVIEW)

HOW TO: Bad mental illness tropes

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By xxdelinquentxx


The big list of bad mental illness and neuro-divergence tropes:

 - Surreal/magical realism/horror stories where it was all in the imagination of a mentally ill person instead.

 - Villains with scary/stigmatised mental illness, especially to explain their 'evil' or to make them scarier.

 - Psychosis causing people to murder others.

 - Really equating mental illness with violence at all. 

 - A character being 'crazy'. Not schizophrenic, not traumatised, just ambiguously 'crazy'.  

 - Neurodivergent qualities (stimming, echolalia, and so on) being used to code a character as off-putting. How often have you seen a character rocking or talking to themselves shown in an attempt to make you scared of them? 

 - Therapists being cold, unfeeling, clinical in their treatment of patients. that's just called a bad therapist. you can have a bad therapist character, but a therapist treating you like a laboratory animal isn't normal. 

 - Therapists not seeming to have or follow ethics at all.

 - Therapists being unhelpful because the protagonist is not actually mentally ill and there's something fantastical or supernatural going on. 

 - The supernatural is misdiagnosed as mentally ill (not bad necessarily but overused).

 - Characters always hating and resenting being in therapy (yes, you can have a character who hates therapy but therapy does help people and many people look forward to their appointments a lot). 

 - Weird, Freudian psychoanalysts and Rorschach ink blots being all that therapy is. Therapists analysing dreams and deducing deeply buried childhood traumas from random habits a character has.

 - OCD as a character quirk or as comedy.

 - OCD just meaning neat freak.

 - Any mental illness as a character quirk or as comedy.

 - Mental illness always being extremely severe and life altering instead of being something that people can learn to live/cope with. For example depressed people are perfectly fine if they aren't actively suicidal. 

 - 'Tough love' approach to panic attacks or severe phobias. Even worse: this actually working. 

 - A character recovering from mental illness because another character tells them to get over themselves/yells at them/shows them how stupid they are. 

 - PTSD where there are no other symptoms besides flashbacks and nightmares. 

 - Trauma being used to make a character edgy and not really being honestly handled.

 - Trauma being used to excuse all evil acts a character does.

 - Characters having to forgive their abusers as part of their character growth.

 - Someone getting triggered for comedy.

 - Panic attacks being used for comedy.

 - ^ Either of these things being supposedly comedic because they happen to male characters and are thus emasculating. Men have trauma. Men have anxiety disorder. They just do. 

 - Mental illness in men being emasculating ever, at all.

 - Mental illness being caused by some kind of trauma or past tragedy.

 - There's a big reveal of what happened to a character and that precipitates their recovery. recovery is more complex than that. 

 - a character being on any kind of medication for mental illness symptoms. For example, a character going on anxiety meds because they're excessively uptight. 

 - A character being for some reason being super opposed to being on meds. 

 - Characters entirely recovering from their mental illnesses as part of their character arc. recovery is a complex process and it's almost never that smooth. You can show recovery of course but this is oversimplified. 

 - Characters recovering from their mental illness in the same way they might overcome a character flaw. 

 - Mental illness cured by getting with the right partner. a supportive partner can help, but the mental illness is still going to be there. 

 - Specifically trauma being cured by romantic relationships. There's a kernel of truth to this in that social relationships aid in healing trauma, but being loved by the right person isn't just going to make trauma disappear.

 - Autistic kid who is a genius asshole; really the whole trope of 'super smart and eccentric but no empathy or any attempt to show regard for others.'

 - Autistic character who has one super specific savant skill, i mean that happens but not to most.

 - The autistic younger sibling or endearing kid that does nothing in the story.

 - Autistics who are there for inspiration porn.

 - Autism being portrayed just as a person having the mind of a child forever. Autistics being super innocent about sexual things or unintentionally doing something sexually inappropriate.

 - That hyperactive little boy in the background character whose ADHD diagnosis is clearly just his mom making terrible excuses for his behaviour. 

 - Any kind of anti-psychiatry sentiment from people who know nothing about it. Your opinions about how antidepressants are overprescribed are irrelevant as they can possibly be if you neither have a mental illness nor have studied it outside of gen-ed psych class. Don't slip shit like that into fiction. 

 - If you are not mentally ill/ND: your opinions about metal illness or neuro-divergence, how people should cope with it, what it reveals about society and the world, or what secret superpower it confers, put into the mouth of a mentally ill or ND character. Basically don't use your characters as mouthpieces for your opinions or insights about mental illness if you don't belong to the groups you're writing about. 

 - Insane asylums as setting for horror because mentally ill people scary. 

 - Tortured artist, the idea that having a mental illness, specifically an unmedicated mental illness, gives you this deep artistic insight others don't have. 

 - Aesthetic depression. Depression being this deep, poetic darkness.

 - Suicide being poetic and romantic.

 - Depression gets better when your lie does, automatically.

 - Disabled people being assumed unable to survive in a post apocalyptic setting. 

 - Gendering of mental illness: anorexia only happens to teenage girls, PTSD is for men who have served in the military. 

 - Characters dropping the 'mentally ill' label as part of character growth.

 - ND characters acting more like everyone else as part of their character growth.

 - Aesthetic eating disorders.

 - Normalising disordered eating, unhealthy dieting. Disillusioned middle aged women characters or teenaged girls who keep staring themselves or are taking dangerous detoxes as a throwaway quirk







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