Beautiful Books And Reviews

66) Eloquent

Title: Eloquent
Author: 
What is 'Eloquent'?
      - A story categorised as 'randomic/fanfic'...

Rating - 
        8.5/10

EBI - 
- Sometimes you use speech marks (") where you should use quotation marks (')
- Use more commas in sentences where you want to pause and accentuate the tones of the narrative
- 'difficultly' is a very tricky word to put in after 'he started walking' so just watch your phrasing - it's okay to go back and edit and proof read etc, no one has to be perfect the first time
- Use words to show numbers when characters are speaking
- Watch for typos
- Tense changes when saying the main person wonders or needs to do something, even though it's their feelings, it should still be past tense unless you're quoting thoughts, which would then be in the future/present tense

Review - 
  'eloquent' is a perfect little collection of beautiful little short stories/features. The characters have beautiful names and each story has its own unique set up and event, genre and characters. The setting and characters are developed easily within such little time and they're original, cute and most of all - good to read, especially the Christmas one! Very festive, very lovely. There's something of almost every genre for a reader of almost anything - so you're guaranteed to enjoy pretty much either way. Because the stories are one parts, you also have the ability to fit them into your life easily and just read one here and there - making them convenient as well as complimentary.

Blurb - 

\\ a one-shots book

//eloquent// fluent or persuasive in speaking or writing

A collection of one-shots, short stories and tales I come up with when inspiration hits.

So what are you waiting for? Go and find the perfect little one-shot for you <3