10) An Unknown Love Story You Never Knew

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Title: An Unknown Love Story You Never Knew

Author: pranabrtn

What is this? -This, is a love story, of course!

*I did not do this review- thatTJgirl did this one*

Rating-
   3/10           (This was because of the grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes, and the fact of it being hard to read)

EBI-
   You have heaps of spelling/grammatical errors throughout all of the chapters. I (thatTJgirl ) suggest that you get an editor or ask someone to read over it for you and pick out all of the mistakes. It would be much easier to read if you changed the font styles out of italics and bold, too.

Review-
   It is a really good start, the plot is good, but the only thing letting you down are all of the grammar and spelling mistakes. If they were to be fixed, your story would have a much higher rating. Your characters are really good though, and I really like the main one.

Do I (thatTJgirl ) recommend this?
-Yes, I do recommend this to you (a reader) but you just need to be aware that the story has some errors.


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