Title; Sins of Gods
Author: AthenaPrue450
What is 'Sins of Gods'?
-Sins of Gods is a lovely story that creates a new and spiritual atmosphere where gods are faced with the decision of siding with either evil or gold.
Rating-
7/10
EBI-
• Try to watch your punctuation- in some places you use speech marks and then towards the end, just a space. For example, "cat" instead of "Cat," or "Cat." If you get what I mean (?)
• Some typos, if you like I will go through and comment the typos (?)
• You could use more descriptive writing, and go into a lot more detail on the actual scene as well as the gods.
Review-
- The atmosphere and storyline is pure gold, and really well structured. Just like 'Blue.' There's a really clear effect on the reader that makes me want to read on. I think you should really continue to develop and run with it, because I think that there's a good chance that it will attract quite a few more readers.
Do I recommend this story?
-yes.
Fancy checking it out?
Here's the link! \/
http://w.tt/1Xy6kyY
YOU ARE READING
Beautiful Books And Reviews
TilfeldigHere you can find/receive: • Book Advertising (Features) • Book Ratings (/10) • Reads/Readers • Reviews • Recommendations • Improvements • Edits • Grammar Sweeps • Comment Suggestions/Corrections Honesty's the best policy and I'm too honest for my o...
