The first thing I have to say to y'all, is:
A lot of people think I'm making Tris weaker than she really is. I agree, I am making her pretty weak, but that's how you build suspense in a story. You need to put in a lot of emotion.
Plus, if all of that happened to you, (your whole family is dead, you endured terrifying testing, and you were kidnapped by your soul mates father and almost beaten to death) how would you react?
So, please, I don't really want to see anymore comments about this topic. Trust me, Tris WILL make it through this problem! She won't be this way forever!
I also wanted to thank every one of my readers for voting, and giving me encouraging feedback! ILYSM!💛💙💜💚❤️💗💖💘
If you have any suggestions for the story, (other than making Tris emotionally stronger) PLEASE let me know!
Thank you for taking your time to read this!
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*CONTAINS ALLEGIANT SPOILERS!* what would happen if Tris hadn't died? This story will keep you on the edge of your seat, you will laugh and cry with all the characters. Please read and give me your input! This is my first fan fiction, so please no s...