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The Player Bet

The Player Bet

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Naomi By Naooomi_ Updated Aug 21, 2013

"When his lips met mine it was like a fire burning inside me was finally let out. I had experienced many of his kisses before, yet none were filled with so much passion or love. I was doing everything I had sworn I wouldn't do again. I was falling for a player."

Alyssa Daniels is a stubborn girl, along with her best friend David. It's a natural part of their lives to bet each other. When David goes as far as to bet Alyssa to get involved with the biggest player in school, Alyssa puts her heart on the line again to try to prove to him that she can do anything. Along the way, Alyssa breaks the number one rule she has made for herself; Don't fall in love with the player.

Naooomi_ Naooomi_ Jul 16, 2012
@SpacerX thanks you! I am trying to make the up coming chapters much more descriptive :)
Lily4Fox3 Lily4Fox3 Jul 16, 2012
I really like where this is going!  I love Alyssa's personality and I can tell I will be begging for this story to be updated soon!
SpacerX SpacerX Jul 16, 2012
I think you could had more information and descriptions : ) I love the whole 'bet' idea with the card mansion, it really kick starts the story and gives us an idea what it's about. :D
Naooomi_ Naooomi_ Jul 15, 2012
@StoriesMakeMeCry oh I haven't read your story, I'll check it out ^_^
Naooomi_ Naooomi_ Jul 15, 2012
@dreamernow31 thank you! I made sure to make it so it wasn't cliched :)
SnowyRoses SnowyRoses Jul 15, 2012
Reminds me of my story. xD  Though thank goodness they're different in lots of ways.  Nice first chapter!