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Alright cool. Slight word of warning, I have a very strong love-hate relationship with creepypasta, so we'll have to see how this goes.
Character information
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Alright so there's a fair few cliches here. The duo personality thing can be done well but is weirdly common in the creepypasta fan base, the most obvious example being homicidal Liu and Sully. This can be done well, like I said but for that to work you're going to have to make these characters more complex. Instead of just writing their personalities out in bullet points, come up with paragraphs that show all their traits. People have a lot more then one character stereotype.
As far as appearence goes, graphic, heterochromic eyes are also common and also don't make sense with no reason behind this. Eyes are a strange little thing in the community where they're a main focus point and are used to make the character more unique, Judge Angels is a good example. However, I believe that the more a murderous character fits in the more scary, because realistic is what you should always go for with horror, even when dealing with the supernatural.
So, I suggest making their eye colour normal and focusing on developing their personality and figuring out the logic behind the duo personality thing.
Relationships
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