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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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Cool, already given my thoughts on this but I had to go back and find this because you gotta remember I have so many reviews in this book that you can't expect me to remember every character I look at.
Character information
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Alright so most of this is fine though I suggest making his personality more detailed and adding more traits because all you really get from him is nice guy actor. Whilst I understand it's meant to come across as he isn't what he seems, you need to change the personality a bit so that feels more fitting.
Relationships
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