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    Review 87 // Altlas Abernette And Their Alters

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                                This is a pretty common concept so you have to develop reasons for people's actions
                            
                              
                              
                                
                                  
                                  
                                
                              
                             
                            
    
                            
    
                              
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    This is a pretty common concept so you have to develop reasons for people's actions. Why are they discriminated against? What did man-kind do that was so bad to trigger this reaction? 
    
                          
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                                Okay, so I like the sound of this but we are dealing with a mental disorder so I have to tell you to make sure you do appropriate research and understand the illness you're trying to portray properly
                            
                              
                              
                                
                                  
                                  
                                
                              
                             
                            
    
                            
    
                              
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    Okay, so I like the sound of this but we are dealing with a mental disorder so I have to tell you to make sure you do appropriate research and understand the illness you're trying to portray properly.
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