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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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I really like her design, she looks really cute. Be careful though because the cinnamon roll with a tough past and insecurities is pretty common, but can be cool if done well. I also recommend adding more detailed hobbies to make her feel fleshed out.
Relationships
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These relationships are fine, just make sure if you ever make a piece about her that these relationships are well portrayed.
Backstory
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Okay, this is interesting but be careful with incredibly dark backstories for characters. If overdone, it can look like it's being made as shock value to make people feel bad for the character.
Other
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Cool quirk, I don't have any issues here and I actually like the sound of this.
Stats
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I recommend only having one high stat in order for your character to remain balanced and likeable.
Extra
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Cool, don't see many characters that are sidekicks.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
