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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
Here is another review for EtherealCity who wanted me to re-review her bnha oc. Normally, rereviews are shorter than normal reviews because I've seen the character before.
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding
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Good inspirations and concepts. I always love a character that can bring a new concept to the universe.
Character information
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I like the additions. Everything you've added here really helps flesh her out and makes her feel more well-rounded and thought out. Sometimes when people add to characters, they overdo it, but this is very well done.
Relationships
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It's nice to see these relationships fleshed out a bit more. I understand that these fit with her backstory, but do be careful with the missing/dead parents thing because it is very common.
Backstory
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