Book Reviews

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Cover: I LOVE this cover. It is amazing. You are very talented. My points would be:

1) I don't know if your cover portrays the 'wilder' as it is so-called. I feel like this has a very specific connotation- and I would associate it with red shades. If I were you, I would consider just changing up the color scheme to reds, or even just a darker shade of pink. This would also work for the romance vibe of the story. I just think this would make it look better. You can either change up the whole design the same way you first created it, or just add some sort of filter to it. 

Potential color scheme.

This would be the option of adding a filter. Obviously, this is a terrible example as I have done on my computer. This is just the idea I would go for.

As Wilder has silver hair, you could even do the cover in silvery tones. However, I would go with more red colours. Also, make sure the male on the cover has distinctively silver hair to reflect Wilder.

2) Your name at the top needs to be darker. This just makes it more accessible to the eye.

Blurb: A good blurb. I would make minor changes, but otherwise, it tells me everything I need to know. I usually would shorten quotes as you don't want them to take up too much space in the blurb as they actually don't tell you anything you need to know- they are just for readers' interests.

YOURS 

"Wow, I didn't know it could get any 'wilder' than your terrible hairstyle," she said, a grin curling her lips upwards.Wilder bit the inside of his lower lip, not knowing whether to laugh at the lame joke, or be offended, because, damn, was he proud of his pale silver hair.**Wilder. A name not belonging to many, except for one unfortunate boy.Friendships start in the strangest of ways, and Wilder never dreamt of finding an inseparable friend in a person who quite openly made fun of his idiotic name and his dyed hair. According to borderline cynic Em Trueman, that very girl who poked fun at poor, unsuspecting Wilder, not every delicious dish needed to be fancy, and not everybody you fall in love with loved you back.Or did they?And according to Wilder, the world wasn't black and white; even if your eyes saw it that way.*An ordinary story such as this can't be as wild as Wilder's name, but it sure can be a rollercoaster for the protagonists.

ADAPTATIONS

"Wow, I didn't know it could get any wilder than your terrible hairstyle," she grinned. Wilder bit his lower lip, because, damn, was he proud of his pale silver hair.

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Wilder. A name belonging to few. Few being one unfortunate boy.

Friendships start in the strangest of ways. Wilder never dreamt of finding a friend- never mind a best friend. Now, he had an inseparable friendship where one peculiar girl openly made fun of his idiotic name and dyed hair. 

According to a borderline cynic, Em Trueman- the very girl who poked fun at poor, unsuspecting Wilder- not every dish needs to be fancy, and not everybody you fall in love with loves you back.

 Were her predictions correct? 

According to Wilder, the world wasn't black and white- even if your eyes saw it that way. An ordinary story such as this surely can't be as wild as Wilder's name, but it sure can be a rollercoaster for the protagonists.

Originality: I love this story. I think the idea is actually quite original. When you step into the romance/love category, originality most often goes out of the window as most love stories are the same. Yours- however- is very interesting and new.

Flow: I really don't have much to say. Your grammar is great minus a few simple errors that can be corrected in editing. Your word usage is amazing- great vocabulary. Everything flows spectacularly and the paragraph sizes are amazing. Wow, you are really great at writing. I am sorry but I have little to nothing to say about your book as it is already so amazing. I love how you put the apostrophes' on the accent words like 'bout. You have done a really good job.

Chapter size: They are all 6-7 minutes long. This works perfectly for your story so I have no further comments. Good work!

Basics: You are a great writer. Overall, I really don't have much to say. Everything works so well together and yeah... really amazing work. The storyline is amazing too. The only thing I would work on would be the blurb and the cover!! Truly great stuff. <3