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Cover: I love this cover, except for the fact that this is a Banksy piece of art. This is obviously really subjective to their work, and gives me a totally different image than your story. Though I love the photo, it gives me more of a Banksy autobiography vibe, rather than an actual book. The text could do with being put one under each other, I think this would look better.

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Blurb: I would work on it. There is only a really short description that doesn't tell me much about the story. I would try add a bit that is about the actual story. It is a really good section at the moment, and I would keep what you have, just adapt slightly.

Originality: I don't believe I have read anything near this description, so I will say that this concept is completely original. Really good work.

Flow: I cannot see any problems with the way you write. Everything is consistent and makes sense. Also, your use of grammar and vocabulary is great. My only problem would be chapter length and the whole size of the story? Why is the story only 23 minutes long? Is it supposed to be a short story? Anyways, good writing and capability, keep up the good work <3

Chapter size: Besides the prologue and epilogue, they are all around 4-5 minutes. I would bring this up to 7-8 minutes, as I think this worse best for most books on here. You can just add more content in each chapter, by adding more description into each paragraph.

Basics: I really don't have much to say about this story- it only being 23 minutes long. This would equate to about 2 chapters in an average published book, so I think you should state somewhere that this is a short story. I would work on the cover and the blurb, to make sure that the concept from your story is actually displayed. No one is going to click on your book if they have no idea what it is about. I ould work on this. Otherwise, your grammar and vocabulary is great, and the story is great so far.