Constructivecritisism Stories

Mumbo was born first in line to the kingdom of hermit craft, he was smart, and had talents people would give up their souls for, but one fateful day he meets a sweet gardener who treats him as equal and he starts to fall. And fall hard he did. This gardener's name was Grian short as could be with a red turtle neck jumper that looked worn and stitched together, but Mumbo found his dazzling even when he had splatters of dirt on his face from working in the gardens. Mumbo on the other hand looked well-groomed, his deep black hair always slicked back. He wouldn't be caught dead in something so informal. His normal outfit was a stylish black suit with a white undershirt and a simple red tie. Grian secretly laughed at the Prince's wardrobe he wouldn't be able to put up with being so formal all the time, but little did they know that would all change soon. (Grumbo, there might be triggering subjects in the such as S/H and depression, but not too severe I will put tw on chapters that have them, as well as right before talk of said subject is put)

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On a cold night a penguin was born but he was different from the other penguins, he travels on a long journey to prove that he belongs with penguins and his difference could help them survive.

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any feedback or constructive critisism on my books but pls no hate!

This is just another one of those book review pages. Just fyi, I am a pretty harsh grader especially about grammar, sentence structure, spacing, and wording. Just follow me and message on the second chapter comments for what book you want me to review and your good! Also would not hurt to tell other people about it too.

This is a list of tropes and sh*t that I find in various stories that p*ss me off.

This is a small short story i wrote for class, warning is that you may get some feels. Constructive critisism is encouraged, this story is also to raise awarnes about things like this that happen.

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I just want to get feedback on my writing. That's it.

This book will consist of many writing exercises that I will be doing to hopefully improve my skill. Constructive criticism would absolutely amazing! If you do read any of these let me know what you think and what you would suggest I do to improve. thank you so much.

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