Book Reviews

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Cover: I quite like this cover and its simplicity. I wouldn't make too many changes. Mine would be:

1) Changing the color of the author's name to be the same color as the title.

2) I think changing the color of the font would be really nice, and make it stand out more.

3) (Only listen to this option if you were thinking of changing the whole thing. This is just my idea if you wanted a whole new cover.)

So, there is a book series called 'Geek Girl' you may have read it, but it doesn't matter if you have. Anyway, the girl in that is obsessed with physics/ maths, all that kind of stuff. The cover of these books are like this:

When reading your blurb, this is what comes to mind. IF you wanted to change the whole cover, you could consider doing a frontal face view of a girl. I think this would fit well with your story.

You could use a girl with a microphone, or someone with musical notes coming out from their mouth. Something that links with the storyline.

At the moment, your cover is giving me serious romance, young teenager vibes, and I think the front-face route would be much better. I will try my best to give you an example:

Ignore how blurry the photos are. Laptop quality blows...

BUT YOU GET THE POINT??

Blurb: Tells me everything I need to know. Perfect blurb. Only minor changes needed to strengthen it up a bit!

YOURS

Can the world be changed? Can people understand that they are wrong? Why do humans so stubbornly believe that they are invariably right? 

These are just a few of the questions which rage in the mind of Eve Summers, a college student who loves physics. But when the girl who absconds the spotlight is made the lead singer of the only music band in college, that's not the worst yet. With the ever-so-sweet Noah Wilson as the band director and her personal mentor, she is forced to realize that she had the answers to life's questions all along.

ADAPTATIONS

Can the world really be changed? Can humans actually realize when they are in the wrong? Why do mortals so stubbornly believe that they are invariably right? 

These are just a few of the mass of questions that wreak havoc in the mind of Eve Summers, a college student who has a particular love for physics. But when the girl who absconds the spotlight is made the lead singer of the only music band in college, what will she do? That's not even the worst yet. With the ever-so-sweet Noah Wilson as the band director and her personal mentor, she is forced to realize that she had the answers to life's questions all along. 

So, just some minor adaptations, that will make the blurb just a teeny bit more interesting!!

Originality: I personally haven't read anything like this, but I love the whole idea. It's really interesting that she has to do something to overcome her fears! Not much else to say in this category, really interesting!!

Flow: Absolutely amazing! Your paragraphing is spectacular, and looks very professional looking. You have a great usage of uncommon words, and the grammar usage is amazing. You have a great variation in sentence types and paragraph starters. Again, I really have nothing to say in this category as everything seems perfect to me!!

Chapter size: Typically 8+ minutes. No comments in this section, this seems to be the perfect size for your book. I favor books that have this chapter length, so well done.

Basics: The storyline is honestly great, and all I can say is please keep writing!! You have an amazing style, and everything flows so well. Lol, I am sad I can't really say anything else because it is all perfect. I would just work on the cover if I were you!! <3