Book Reviews

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Cover: Right off the bat, I love this cover and the design. My changes would be:

1) Making the tiger face bold. If this isn't possible, I would recommend shrinking the face so it is over the figure's face in the background.

2) Changing the font on 'playing with'. At the moment, it looks really default, so I would suggest either capitalizing it, or completely changing the font. In saying this, I love the font on 'fire'. I struggle to see the title, and would think making it bold would solve this problem. I would just suggest playing around more with the cover!! 

Blurb: Very descriptive and tells me everything I need to know. Only minor changes needed, but not necessary!! I would just change the tense of it.

YOURS

The world has changed.Humans now know that supernatural creatures exist, and honestly it went better than anyone could have hoped. Until things that haven't walked the earth in centuries started waking up. 

Delany just wants to carve out a little life for herself under the radar. She works her jobs, she collects her pay, and she goes home. Everything seems to be going according to plan until something evil passes through a portal from Faerie to Earth. 

 Maverick follows the creature through, tasked with hunting it down and returning it to the bonds it escaped in Faerie. No one knows Delany's heritage, but when Maverick crosses paths with her in his pursuit of the loosed evil he has some good guesses. Now she has a choice to make, she can let the evil kill Maverick and have one less worry, but with that she risks it destroying Earth in the process. Or she can help him return the creature to Faerie and find a way to keep the frustratingly persuasive Male at arms length. Delany knows what will happen if Maverick learns the truth, but something about him makes her want to risk it.

ADAPTATIONS

The world has changed. 

Humans now know that supernatural creatures exist, and honestly, their reactions were better than anyone could have hoped. This was until souls that haven't walked the earth in centuries, started to awaken. 

Delany just wanted to carve out a little life for herself under the radar. She worked her jobs, collected her pay, went home. 

Everything seemed to be going according to plan, until something evil passed through a portal from Faerie to Earth. Maverick followed the creature through, tasked with hunting it down and returning it to the bounds it escaped in Faerie. 

No one knows Delany's heritage, but when Maverick crosses paths with her in his pursuit of the loosed evil, he has some good guesses. Now- she has a choice to make, she can let the evil kill Maverick and have one less worry, but with that she risks it destroying Earth in the process. 

Or she can help him return the creature to Faerie, and find a way to keep the frustratingly persuasive Male at arms length. Delany knows what will happen if Maverick learns the truth, but something about him makes her want to risk it.

Originality: Usually, I don't read books in this category, but it seems very original to me! It is a great storyline!!

Flow: I am struggling greatly to say ANYTHING about this book as everything is literally perfect. There are slim to no grammar/ punctuation mistakes, and everything flows really well. I think that your paragraphing is amazing, and you have a real variation in sentence starters and structure. Wow, there is literally nothing to say- good work!

Chapter size: The chapters are honestly a perfect size!! The length is perfect for me personally, and everyone loves longer chapters!!

Basics: I actually tried my hardest to find anything wrong with this book, but I really couldn't find any!! The only part of this book I would change is the cover- and that is only adapting it. Amazing storyline, and a great concept!! Lovely read.