He Stole My First Kiss -going through editing-

He Stole My First Kiss -going through editing-

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Fluffy By proud2bme Updated Aug 03, 2011

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    Want pure cliched romance? Here's one :))  (My first ever story, so it's pure cliched teen romance and it's going to be edited so excuse my very bad grammars) Written by: me Edited (still being edited) by: ashladee13

I would be like "DONT CALL ME A PRINCESS!! Call me a queen👑😏"
nelly4life nelly4life Jul 15, 2015 11:10PM
I knew it. I can pretty much see the whole book. Imma still go 2 the next page tho
nelly4life nelly4life Jul 15, 2015 11:00PM
When she mentioned the tongue part. I'm lmao cos I just knew he'd kiss her again.
tryme1231 tryme1231 Nov 14, 2014 02:06AM
Even if the stars and moon collide oh oh ooh I really don't care
Missdiva09 Missdiva09 Dec 07, 2013 11:47PM
I think you did an Awsome job!I totally loved the book,lol!!!!Try capitalilizing your sentences.
Ashladee13 Ashladee13 Aug 11, 2011 10:00PM
hey if you want, I can edit this book for you! :D  PM me, I'm going to read this whole book now, lol