He Stole My First Kiss -going through editing-

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Fluffy By proud2bme Updated 4 years ago
    Want pure cliched romance? Here's one :))  (My first ever story, so it's pure cliched teen romance and it's going to be edited so excuse my very bad grammars) Written by: me Edited (still being edited) by: ashladee13
When she mentioned the tongue part. I'm lmao cos I just knew he'd kiss her again.
Even if the stars and moon collide oh oh ooh I really don't care
I think you did an Awsome job!I totally loved the book,lol!!!!Try capitalilizing your sentences.
I love diffrient pov btw it's so interesting figuring out how diff ppl think so good 4 you!!!!!
I like the story line, but there's too much talking and it's a bit rushed :))
The mistakes r terrible u need to fix them and work on yur grammer but everything else is good the plot and characters, just the mistakes drive me crazy