Title - Broken Until Him
Author- jxstmysxlf
Genre- Love Ballad
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The cover is beautiful and eye catchy. Though I would suggest to edit the blurb which seems to muddle the concept of the story and might detach a few potential readers.
Prologue is really strong and hooks the readers in. The statement- "My life is destroyed but I'm fine", really makes a shiver run down the spine. We are intrigued as to what might have happened. It is a good idea to inculcate the concept of writing diary which has therapeutic effect. We are left thinking what might have happened that the protagonist needs therapy.
I would add here for the author to not to use colons while using internal monologues.
In chapter 1, Instead of just jumping into the present times. You can say- "But still, here I am in this new life, new city, new school". I am impressed with quality of writing that author has used to portray the most neglected and repetitive sequences of school. A very neglected but persistent cliche is busted here as a different and refreshing perspective is found from the other stories which have those first day in school chapters.
Here, though the plot remains the same . But nonetheless, our protagonist manages to find some beauty in several little but significant actions.
The character development is well written, though I am hoping fingers crossed that it won't turn out to be good boy/ bad boy kind of love story. I really find it to be an admirable story.
A light- hearted story which can be read by everyone.
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