Criminal Case: Grimsborough

By PurpleCatAngel

127K 2.2K 803

Marie Holmes just graduated as a police officer and was assigned to the Grimsborough police department. She w... More

Chapter 1: The Death of Rosa Wolf
Chapter 2: Corpse in a Garden-Part 1
Chapter 2: Corpse in a Garden-Part 2
Chapter 3: The Grim Butcher-Part 1
Chapter 3: The Grim Butcher-Part 2
Chapter 3: The Grim Butcher-Part 3
Chapter 4: The Dockyard Killer-Part 1
Chapter 4: The Dockyard Killer-Part 2
Chapter 4: The Dockyard Killer-Part 3
Chapter 5: A Russian Case-Part 1
Chapter 5: A Russian Case-Part 2
Chapter 5: A Russian Case-Part 3
Chapter 6: Good Cop Dead Cop-Part 1
Chapter 6: Good Cop Dead Cop-Part 2
Chapter 6: Good Cop Dead Cop-Part 3
Chapter 7: Death by Crucifixion-Part 1
Chapter 7: Death by Crucifixion-Part 2
Chapter 7: Death by Crucifixion-Part 3
Chapter 8: Beautiful No More-Part 1
Chapter 8: Beautiful No More-Part 3
Chapter 9: Burned to the Bone-Part 1
Chapter 9: Burned to the Bone-Part 2
Chapter 9: Burned to the Bone-Part 3
Chapter 10: Under the Knife-Part 1
Chapter 10: Under the Knife-Part 2
Chapter 10: Under the Knife-Part 3
Chapter 11: Into the Vipers' Nest-Part 1
Chapter 11: Into the Vipers' Nest-Part 2
Chapter 11: Into the Vipers' Nest-Part 3
Chapter 12: Blood on the Trading Floor-Part 1
Chapter 12: Blood on the Trading Floor-Part 2
Chapter 12: Blood on the Trading Floor-Part 3
Chapter 13: Bomb Alert on Grimsborough-Part 1
Chapter 13: Bomb Alert on Grimsborough-Part 2
Chapter 13: Bomb Alert on Grimsborough-Part 3
Chapter 14: Fashion Victim-Part 1
Chapter 14: Fashion Victim-Part 2
Chapter 14: Fashion Victim-Part 3
Chapter 15: Family Blood-Part 1
Chapter 15: Family Blood-Part 2
Chapter 15: Family Blood-Part 3
Chapter 16: The Kiss of Death-Part 1
Chapter 16: The Kiss of Death-Part 2
Chapter 16: The Kiss of Death-Part 3
Chapter 17: The Last Supper-Part 1
Chapter 17: The Last Supper-Part 2
Chapter 17: The Last Supper-Part 3
Chapter 18: In the Dead of Night-Part 1
Chapter 18: In the Dead of Night-Part 2
Chapter 18: In the Dead of Night-Part 3
Chapter 19: Innocence Lost-Part 1
Chapter 19: Innocence Lost-Part 2
Chapter 19: Innocence Lost-Part 3
Chapter 20: A Deadly Game-Part 1
Chapter 20: A Deadly Game-Part 2
Chapter 20: A Deadly Game-Part 3
Chapter 21: The Secret Experiments-Part 1
Chapter 21: The Secret Experiments-Part 2
Chapter 21: The Secret Experiments-Part 3
Chapter 22: To Die or Not to Die-Part 1
Chapter 22: To Die or Not to Die-Part 2
Chapter 22: To Die or Not to Die-Part 3
Chapter 23: The Final Journey-Part 1
Chapter 23: The Final Journey-Part 2
Chapter 23: The Final Journey-Part 3
Chapter 24: Anatomy of a Murder-Part 1
Chapter 24: Anatomy of a Murder-Part 2
Chapter 24: Anatomy of a Murder-Part 3
Chapter 25: The Ghost of Grimsborough-Part 1
Chapter 25: The Ghost of Grimsborough-Part 2
Chapter 25: The Ghost of Grimsborough-Part 3
Chapter 26: The Summoning-Part 1
Chapter 26: The Summoning-Part 2
Chapter 26: The Summoning-Part 3
Chapter 27: The Lake's Bride-Part 1
Chapter 27: The Lake's Bride-Part 2
Chapter 27: The Lake's Bride-Part 3
Chapter 28: The Haunting of Elm Manor-Part 1
Chapter 28: The Haunting of Elm Manor-Part 2
Chapter 28: The Haunting of Elm Manor-Part 3
Chapter 29: No Smoke Without Fire-Part 1
Chapter 29: No Smoke Without Fire-Part 2
Chapter 29: No Smoke Without Fire-Part 3
Chapter 30: The Wollcrafts' Creature-Part 1
Chapter 30: The Wollcrafts' Creature-Part 2
Chapter 30: The Wollcrafts' Creature-Part 3
Chapter 31: Dog Eat Dog-Part 1
Chapter 31: Dog Eat Dog-Part 2
Chapter 31: Dog Eat Dog-Part 3
Chapter 32: Murder on Campus-Part 1
Chapter 32: Murder on Campus-Part 2
Chapter 32: Murder on Campus-Part 3
Chapter 33: Killing Me Softly-Part 1
Chapter 33: Killing Me Softly-Part 2
Chapter 33: Killing Me Softly-Part 3
Chapter 34: Dead Man Running-Part 1
Chapter 34: Dead Man Running-Part 2
Chapter 34: Dead Man Running-Part 3
Chapter 35: At the End of the Rope-Part 1
Chapter 35: At the End of the Rope-Part 2
Chapter 35: At the End of the Rope-Part 3
Chapter 36: The Devil's Playground-Part 1
Chapter 36: The Devil's Playground-Part 2
Chapter 36: The Devil's Playground-Part 3
Chapter 37: The Reaper and the Geek-Part 1
Chapter 37: The Reaper and the Geek-Part 2
Chapter 37: The Reaper and the Geek-Part 3
Chapter 38: Spring Break Massacre-Part 1
Chapter 38: Spring Break Massacre-Part 2
Chapter 38: Spring Break Massacre-Part 3
Chapter 39: Marked for Death-Part 1
Chapter 39: Marked for Death-Part 2
Chapter 39: Marked for Death-Part 3
Chapter 40: An Elementary Murder-Part 1
Chapter 40: An Elementary Murder-Part 2
Chapter 40: An Elementary Murder-Part 3
Chaper 41: The Rorschach Reaper-Part 1
Chapter 41: The Rorschach Reaper-Part 2
Chapter 41: The Rorschach Reaper-Part 3
Chapter 42: Blood and Glory-Part 1
Chapter 42: Blood and Glory-Part 2
Chapter 42: Blood and Glory-Part 3
Chapter 43: Troubled Waters-Part 1
Chapter 43: Troubled Waters-Part 2
Chapter 43: Troubled Waters-Part 3
Chapter 44: The Scent of Death-Part 1
Chapter 44: The Scent of Death-Part 2
Chapter 44: The Scent of Death-Part 3
Chapter 45: A Shot of Beauty-Part 1
Chapter 45: A Shot of Beauty-Part 2
Chapter 45: A Shot of Beauty-Part 3
Chapter 46: Drive, Swing, Die-Part 1
Chapter 46: Drive, Swing, Die-Part 2
Chapter 46: Drive, Swing, Die-Part 3
Chapter 47: One Wedding and a Funeral-Part 1
Chapter 47: One Wedding and a Funeral-Part 2
Chapter 47: One Wedding and a Funeral-Part 3
Chapter 48: Good Girls Don't Die-Part 1
Chapter 48: Good Girls Don't Die-Part 2
Chapter 48: Good Girls Don't Die-Part 3
Chapter 49: All The King's Horses-Part 1
Chapter 49: All The King's Horses-Part 2
Chapter 49: All The King's Horses-Part 3
Chapter 50: Snakes on the Stage-Part 1
Chapter 50: Snakes on the Stage-Part 2
Chapter 50: Snakes on the Stage-Part 3
Chapter 51: It All Ends Here-Part 1
Chapter 51: It All Ends Here-Part 2
Chapter 51: It All Ends Here-Part 3
Chapter 51: It All Ends Here-Part 4
Chapter 52: A Brave New World-Part 1
Chapter 52: A Brave New World-Part 2
Chapter 52: A Brave New World-Part 3
Chapter 53: Burying the Hatchet-Part 1
Chapter 53: Burying the Hatchet-Part 2
Chapter 53: Burying the Hatchet-Part 3
Chapter 54: The Poisoned Truth-Part 1
Chapter 54: The Poisoned Truth-Part 2
Chapter 54: The Poisoned Truth-Part 3
Chapter 55: Ashes to Ashes-Part 1
Chapter 55: Ashes to Ashes-Part 2
Chapter 55: Ashes to Ashes-Part 3
Chapter 56: There Will Be Blood-Part 1
Chapter 56: There Will Be Blood-Part 2
Chapter 56: There Will Be Blood-Part 3

Chapter 8: Beautiful No More-Part 2

736 19 8
By PurpleCatAngel

Once he was back at his desk, Ramirez approached him while be tugged by a German Shepard and a King Charles Spaniel. Jones smiled and petted the dog's heads. While he was doing that, Jones said to the dogs, "I'm counting on you guys to help me do this. My partner's life and ours are at stake." And both dogs toppled Jones over licking his face as if telling him they'll do it.

Ramirez gave a small smile watching Jones get tickled in the face with dog tongues. He then told him, "Mac and Della here are the best. For the corporal's sake, I wish you luck." And Jones sat up while wiping the dog drool off his face and nodded in determination.

Once Ramirez left, Jones sat at his desk and began looking the case over and he began thinking it's starting to sound like a bad tv script; a dead stripper who happens to work for a mafia boss. Also there's a mysterious killer who happens to like cats and wears expensive perfume. Jones began to wonder about the letter Marie found and he noticed it had no sender's name and no personal info. Jones then remembered that Nathan said Trixie's killer hugged her before she died.

Jones then came to the conclusion that even though Trixie didn't know who her fan was, she clearly felt she could trust them and she must've received way more than one letter. He then stood up and thought he should go see What Biff has to say about any of this and he should also take a look at the crates that were next to Trixie's body. Soon, he took the dogs by the leashes and headed out to the car. Once the dogs were in the back, Jones went to the driver's seat and when he was in it he headed off to the delivery crates first.

When he got back to the alley behind the diner, Jones took the dogs from the backseat and soon they started sniffing for clues. After sniffing for a while, the dogs began to bark when they caught a whiff from a bloody sledgehammer. Jones smiled down at them and thought, I think dogs have an inner GPS in them and he took the hammer and he bagged it hoping to get a sample from it. Once he took a sample from it, he was disappointed that there were no fingerprints but there was a blood sample.

Once he bagged the blood sample and gave it to an officer so they can give it to Grace, he approached Mrs. Holly and asked her if she saw anything else, but she shook her head and told him that she told him everything she saw. She saw the body, then she called the police, then she fed her cat and then she was questioned by Jones and Marie. Suddenly, the old woman remembered that she saw the girl holding some kind of necklace in her hand and she died holding it. Surprised Jones began thinking that he and Marie didn't find any necklace on the crime scene. Jones then thought, if he finds that necklace it'll get him closer to finding the killer and saving his partner.

Once he was done talking with Mrs. Holly, Jones decided to go to the Blue Flamingo to talk to Biff. When he got there and took the dogs out of the backseat, Jones was greeted by Biff and when Biff saw the dogs he petted one of them on the head and he asked Jones what their names were. Jones told him the German Shepard is Mac and the spaniel is Della and they're helping him with the case until he gets Marie back. Soon, Jones showed Biff the letter and told him it was for Trixie.

Once Biff saw the letter he crossed his eyes and exclaimed, "You say this letter was for Trixie?! Damn! If I saw it, I never would've let her go. She was always so trusting!"

Suddenly, Biff got an idea and told Jones he knows how he can help him. Biff explained that Alice is the barmaid at the club and she was good friends with Trixie and he should go talk to her. Jones thanked him and headed towards the bar to talk to Alice. Once he approached the bar, Jones asked her, "Miss August, can you tell me anything about Trixie?"

The barmaid frowned sadly when she heard her dead friend's name and she explained to him, "Trixie and I weren't best friends or anything like that. I invited her to my place on time but when she learned I had a cat she told me she couldn't come cause she was allergic."

Getting curious, Jones asked her if she ever talked to her about the letters she got and Alice explained that Trixie had secret admirer and she warned her to be cautious because Trixie was infatuated. Jones then asked who the admirer might've been but the barmaid frowned and told him she had no idea. But she told him she might think it was a creepy guy named Colin from the movie theater and he was totally obsessed with Trixie. Jones then asked her if she can get her boss and she nodded in agreement telling him she will.

Once Alice was gone, Jones smirked and thought she's quite the delightful girl. He then turned serious and said to himself, "I'll talk to this Colin guy once I clear the air with Marconi."

Meanwhile, Alice knocked on the office door and told Marconi on the other side that Jones wants to speak with him and he called out he'll be right there. Marconi then got up from his desk and looked over to Marie who was wrapped in a blanket on the couch and said, "Your partner sure is persistent."

Marie then crossed her eyes to the gangster and said, "He'll solve this case and save me from you. You'll see!" And he left the office after she said that.

Once Marconi approached Jones, the dogs started to growl and bark at him and Jones told them to calm down which they did. Jones then asked him, "Tony, I want to know what perfume you wear and what pets you have?"

"Perfume and pets? Is this some sort of random question day officer?" Marconi asked and Jones told him in a stern voice to just answer the question cause he doesn't want to get angry with him.

Marconi then scoffed and told him that he does wear the perfume Eau d'Homme and he does have a cat. He also added he knows how to use a lint roller too, but Jones just rolled his eyes on that snide remark. Jones then looked the gangster in the eyes and told him he'll come back later and he took the dogs and headed out to talk to Colin Stokes. After Jones was gone, Marconi went back to his office and approached Marie and he then opened the blanket she was wrapped up in showing him her naked body.

He then sat back down at his desk and said to her, "You don't have to hide yourself babe. Besides, I work a lot better when I have something beautiful to look at." And Marie just rolled her eyes and thought, David better wrap up this case soon cause I don't know how much more I take.

Meanwhile at the movie theater, Jones approached Colin the projectionist and asked him if he had some sort of obsession to Trixie like Alice said and he told the officer that he was a devoted fan and Trixie valued his presence. Jones then gave a small smile and thought, I'm sure she did; a handsome boy like him. Jones then put on a serious face and told Colin that he would like to have a look around his workplace and the boy stepped aside as Jones entered with the two police dogs.

Suddenly, they barked when they caught a whiff from any open box and Jones saw that it was filled with pictures of women and he thought, how many of these girls does he stalk? Soon, he took the box back to the station,dumped out the pictures and started rummaging through them. While he was rummaging, he took a quick peek at some of them and thought, Colin sure has good taste. Suddenly, he came across an empty vial and had it sent to the lab to get it analyzed.

After the vial was dropped off, Jones and the dogs headed back to the Blue Flamingo to check and see if there were any more important clues that he missed. After looking around, Jones found a tube of lipstick and thought that it might belong to Alice. So he decided to give it back to her and even talk to her while he was at it. Once he showed her the tube of lipstick, Alice exclaimed, "Where did you find that lipstick?! It's the same one Trixie gave me!"

"I thought you and Trixie weren't close friends Alice?" Jones said curiously.

Alice just smiled brightly and told him they weren't but she remembered telling Trixie she liked the color shade and she just gave it to her. Jones then asked what perfume she was wearing and Alice told him it's Eau d'Homme and her ex used to wear it so she grew to like the smell and people always said it fits her fine. Jones then smiled and thought it sure does. Once he exited the club and placed the dogs in the backseat, Jones' phone began ringing and when he answered it Grace told him she got the results for the blood and the empty vial.

When Jones got back to the station, he rushed over to the lab with Mac and Della at his heels, once he got there, Grace explained to him what she found out. First, she told him that the blood he found on the hammer is Trixie's which meant that Jones found the murder weapon. Jones got surprised and he began thinking, from the size of the hammer it's no wonder Trixie's face was such a mess. Jones then asked Grace, "What about the vial? What did you get from that?"

Grace then smirked at him and said, "Well David if you wanted to offer me perfume you could've bought me a bottle instead of giving me an old sample. It seems you must've been inspired cause Colin's perfume matched the brand used on Trixie's fan mail."

Next to him, the dogs began to growl and Jones made a serious face and he left the lab after thanking Grace to go and grill Colin Stokes once more. Once Jones got there, Colin angrily approached him and exclaimed, "Those photos are my personal property! You had no right to take them!"

Jones then grabbed the man by the shirt collar and pinned him against the wall and said, "I have every right to whatever's in here Mr. Stokes! I'm in an already bad enough mood cause right now my partner is being held hostage by the biggest bastard in town! And I may never see her again unless I solve this case!

"Plus, you have no right to stalk these women! Now about the perfume Eau d'Homme I don't think you can afford it with your salary!"

Colin then meekly explained that he got a free sample from the shop it came from and he knew Trixie would like it but it evaporated a long time ago. Jones then looked down at the man's best and saw that it was covered in cat hairs and he asked him if he had one and Colin broke out into a sweat and explained he takes care of the strays behind the cinema. He then told Jones that he didn't do anything to Trixie.

Jones then let him go and Colin dropped to the ground. After talking with Colin, Jones went back to the station and he sat at his desk and began thinking that at this rate Colin Stokes will confess to murdering Trixie before he even finds solid proof that he did it. And Jones gave a small smile and said to himself, "I'm almost there Marie. Just hold on."

Continue Reading

You'll Also Like

Roommate By Diana

Mystery / Thriller

17.2K 1.1K 33
Jackson lives in a small town of Montrose his whole life. After several bodies are found in the area, the police come to a conclusion that a serial k...
9.7K 268 20
"Wasn't it exhausting? Lying to my face for so long?" Cleo Atwood is the head of the Oceanside Criminal Investigative department, she's 28 and seemin...
547 0 6
The Criminal Case Fanfics retells a very true untold story of a recent GBPD detective David Jones got divorced from his high school sweetheart, Charl...
55.7K 959 31
Kristen Thomas is a teacher in a small town where she is stuck in a toxic, abusive dead end relationship. She fears the outcome of ending things in s...