Pet Peeves With Fanfiction Part 6

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One person has a boyfriend/girlfriend, that said significant other starts drama with the person's friend.....the person IMMEDIATELY takes the significant other side when they play victim over the person they've probably known longer: Seriously, i get defending your significant other....but over the person you've known LONGER when it's obvious the significant other is lying??

Career driven woman immediately becomes only interesting in a being a mom and that is her entire character arc: You do realise she can be both right? And why is this written as a BAD thing for a woman to be career focused!?!!

Girl knows things because she has brothers: I have a older brother.....I didn't immediately know shit about cars just because I have a older brother, I still can't drive and im freaking 21 years old!!

No diversity: Everyone is straight and white. No gay people, no bisexual people, no asexual people, no pansexual people, no Non-Binary or even trans people. No black people. No Asian people. No Latinos, literally NO OTHER ETHNICITY

One dimensional characters: Please more personality........a character arc? Ben 10 made a 11 year old temperamental power hungry Kevin Levin into a good guy.........let that sink in

Gay characters ALWAYS dying: Man this is annoying

Male characters getting driven due to a woman's death: Why is it a BOOK on a game called Choices, has a strong princess who is motivated to get her kingdom, which was taken from her, back based on what your choices (mine had to do with the childhood best friend) and her mother's death better done then this trope?

Godlike characters: Now i don't mind a badass character.....but the villains kinda look like a joke when they can't even WIN a fight

Good guy spares the villain: Unless the villain is having a character arc, why do the good characters do this? Because your telling me this villain could kill innocent people, torture/violate people, kill the heroes family.......and they'll STILL get spared?!!! Huh?!!! Because I'm you right now, Joan did NOT live in my Walking Dead Season 3 playthrough

Not proof reading: Now this may seem hypocritical as I am PRONE to errors in spelling.....but at least i check back at my chapters and edit it.........why do others go through years without doing that?

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