i'm super sorry since this book is so far in, but i've been having a really hard time continuing this book lol
i kind of fell out of writing in second-person and have been writing a lot of first-person recently. i also don't enjoy writing this book a whole lot? i do like the premise and the plot, though certain things i feel like i could really write better and change
so, there's a rewrite now. it's in first person and will explore more the relationships the main character will make with the others. i think it'll be a "slow burn," if i'm using that word right
((more like super slow burn amirite jese?))
the rewrite's called "midnight therapy and the carrier pigeon" yeah i know it's long lol
it'll deal more on relationships and trust and focus more on character buildingi just always thought the romance in this book went a bit too fast, and being an aromantic person like myself makes that a lot more difficult to work with lol
anyways, sorry this ended up being so late. i've been doing a lot
YOU ARE READING
go read the rewrite please
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