Adopting Niall Horans Baby

Adopting Niall Horans Baby

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glittergeek By glittergeek Updated Jun 24, 2016

"Never thought my life would change so drastically after a simple dinner at my grandparents."

Grammar_police14 Grammar_police14 Feb 21, 2016
Shouldn't she be asking a nurse? We can assume that baby is probably severely injured and actually should be dead if the accident was that horrific.
Grammar_police14 Grammar_police14 Feb 21, 2016
Why is Sarah happy? This is the worst time to look "pleased".
Grammar_police14 Grammar_police14 Feb 21, 2016
Why didn't they pass the background check? When her parents asked her to sign some papers why didn't she carefully read over them? Anybody with common sense knows that when someone asks you to sign something you need to read what you're signing.
Grammar_police14 Grammar_police14 Feb 21, 2016
*months
                              *parents were
                              *babies
                              *our
                              Apparently her mother doesn't know the first rule of driving: keep your eyes on the road. This accident was her fault for not looking straight ahead.
jazmyne_2004 jazmyne_2004 Apr 02, 2016
Can you stop judging their work if that's how they write it then that's how they write it
1dxxxooo 1dxxxooo Aug 15, 2015
The kid on the cover has a better messy bun than every messy bun I have ~attempted~ to create ever