Tori Cormela just turned 17, when her mother spills her tragic news. She lost a bet and couldn't pay it off...so in exchange, she was giving her only daughter up to marry his son. That daughter was Tori...
Wow, I can't believe how good this is!!!
I love it so far...
*vote* you have a new fan!!!
this is actually amazing. when i first clicked on this, i was like 'hmm...never tried an arranged marriage story before, wonder if its any good." and now my minds all "holy crap! wow, amazing!" that's a big boost there, sista! *winks*
love ur story upload soon it is sooooooooo much better than mine i might even start a new one keep uploading and do it fast
Awesome job! I voted (: I can't wait to read more! Eeek so excited ;D
Can you comment on my story? You left a comment on the Romance group's discussion 'Read My Story And I'll Read Yours' but you wanted me to comment first.
Again, awesome job!!
I really love the setting and drama in this, and you have really good descriptions as well. This would be very good as a published book, and if it was, I'd totally buy it!
nice descriptions and settings. the characters sound realistic enough. the only thing is her reaction. other than just screaming, there doesnt seem to be any real emotion or thoughts... maybe something more riveting?
but other than that, good job!