Engaged to a Jerkface...and I have no say in it! [ON HIATUS--may be deleted]

Engaged to a Jerkface...and I have no say in it! [ON HIATUS--may be deleted]

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elephant on steriods. ha, as it that was me! "......" ^_^ By icicles Updated Jul 06, 2011

Tori Cormela just turned 17, when her mother spills her tragic news. She lost a bet and couldn't pay it off...so in exchange, she was giving her only daughter up to marry his son. That daughter was Tori...

Kerenrashish Kerenrashish Jun 17, 2011
Wow, I can't believe how good this is!!!
                              I love it so far...
                              *vote* you have a new fan!!!
lilfishiie lilfishiie Feb 02, 2011
this is actually amazing. when i first clicked on this, i was like 'hmm...never tried an arranged marriage story before, wonder if its any good." and now my minds all "holy crap! wow, amazing!" that's a big boost there, sista! *winks*
aloel96 aloel96 Aug 27, 2010
love ur story upload soon it is sooooooooo much better than mine i might even start a new one keep uploading and do it fast
socloseyetsofaraway socloseyetsofaraway Aug 22, 2010
Awesome job! I voted (: I can't wait to read more! Eeek so excited ;D
                              
                              Can you comment on my story? You left a comment on the Romance group's discussion 'Read My Story And I'll Read Yours' but you wanted me to comment first.
                              
                              Again, awesome job!!
Iceuni Iceuni Aug 20, 2010
I really love the setting and drama in this, and you have really good descriptions as well. This would be very good as a published book, and if it was, I'd totally buy it!
strawberrykiller37 strawberrykiller37 Aug 15, 2010
nice descriptions and settings. the characters sound realistic enough. the only thing is her reaction. other than just screaming, there doesnt seem to be any real emotion or thoughts... maybe something more riveting?
                              but other than that, good job!