Don't Look Back

Don't Look Back

62.8K Reads 908 Votes 35 Part Story
Cheerreader96 By Cheerreader96 Completed

Alexa Mercer has the perfect life. She’s the head cheerleader, popular, has the perfect boyfriend and she gets everything she wants, but it wasn’t always that way. Four years ago her parents were involved in a car accident, her mother was killed and her father was hospitalized, four months later he got out and left her stranded and alone. She now lives with her best friend Jessica Rodriguez and life’s never been better but, when the new guy Justin Michaels comes along she soon finds out nothing is as it seems.

MidnightStarz MidnightStarz Sep 13, 2011
Well first thing, I noticed how your story started with an alarm clock. I think that's not very original, but the rest of your story seems to be better. You didn't have any mistakes that I spotted of, wonderful. :)
moosechester moosechester Sep 12, 2011
This isn't really my thing, but it was interesting. So keep writing :)
peaceloveapplejuice peaceloveapplejuice Sep 11, 2011
This is such an intriguing start! im not to sure Im liking that aimee chick, a little too shady if you ask me :) reading on
IBreakHearts IBreakHearts Sep 11, 2011
This is really good! I really like the story line and I saw no mistakes! :)
Brokenlessthan3 Brokenlessthan3 Aug 17, 2011
Well..there are some mistakes that need fixing and at time it got a little confusing. But I love Jessica's character. I can also tell that chase is going to be one hottie. I think you need more descriptions but the plot is really intriguing. I think this has potential though. Im off to chap 2! :))
triggerhappy129 triggerhappy129 Jun 17, 2011
I like it but I dont really read storys like thes, wish you the best of luck on the watty awards I enterd them too and have a long way to go