Forest Nightingales - The Forest Wants to Play

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Lewis Nightingale is late coming out of work and so on the way home he makes a decision and brave the forest he has feared since he were a small boy. But a cruel spirit that lies in wait within the forests dark canopy is alured by the fears and hopes to feed on them by making his nightmares real in the reality it creates for its victims.
Only after reading the first chapter, and its pretty scary... great job!!!!
I don't usually read this kinds of stories, but I have to say.. your writing is amazing. You describe everything so well, and I could really put my self in the character's shoes. *Voted*
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                                    I love it, keep writing dude-man!
@NESMAN Sure. I'll message you some when I get home from work later. :)
@NESMAN Don't use them both at the same time. Past - talking about things that have already happened; present - talking about things occuring now. 
Creepy! :) Great job. I'd suggest sticking to one tense (instead of switching between present and past).