I would like to ask if anyone has any criticisms about this book. Because I feel like there is some or a lot. Are the chapters too short? Do I let out chapters too fast? So I would like to ask everyone here about any criticisms that they may have and tell me so I can see where I'm lacking and hopefully improve. It's been bothering me for a long time now.
Also the next chapter is being worked on and may be out by next week. Thank you for your time and your support.