Reviewer-
Pros:
-Love the introduction. It was a wonderful way to start off the book and instantly got me hooked.
-The descriptions are beautiful. I found myself being whisked away into the places that Embrie came across.
-I was hooked throughout the entire 10 chapters. I found no plot inconsistencies, and you could tell the writing had been carefully thought out.
Cons:
-Although I was just told to see if the plot ran smoothly, I found that it would have smoother transitions with proper punctuation. There were some instances where I found sentences to be arranged awkwardly due to the lack of punctuation in them.
Overall, I found the first 10 chapters of the book to be wonderfully written, however, to ensure a better experience for readers I'd add some of the missing punctuation :)
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