Reviewer- SardonyxSwann
PROS:
-I was hooked from the beginning. It lured me into the story, and it's super interesting!
-You can tell each character has depth. From the prologue with Heart to her encounters with Gem, each character has a past I'm itching to know more about.
PROS:
-I was hooked from the beginning. It lured me into the story, and it's super interesting!
-You can tell each character has depth. From the prologue with Heart to her encounters with Gem, each character has a past I'm itching to know more about.
SUMMARY:
The story seems really interesting! Although we're not too far in the story yet, and are still in the beginning, I'm intrigued! The only things I'd change are the punctuation errors as well as possibly making chapters longer? *again, just a suggestion*
I look forward to seeing how your story develops!
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