PROS:
-The beginning instantly got me hooked. It was short, yet beautiful.
-The idea behind the story is super unique! Usually on Wattpad I find that it's the other way around--a prince is looking for a bride, so I love this idea!
-I was shocked at how rudely many of the suitors treated the Princess! My jaw literally dropped. That was a really interesting point in the plot!
-I love how he used to be just an ordinary teacher, and how when he was selected to become King he thought about his students! Lots of personality and character depth there.
CONS:
-I found lots of grammatical errors in the chapters, especially with the spelling of Princess Annabella's name. It's to the point where I'm not even sure how it's spelled. Annabella or Anabella?
-There are also punctuation errors. It's not enough that it's really distracting, but it still should be fixed.
SUMMARY:
Overall, I really enjoyed the idea of your story! The execution, however... I'd recommend rewriting the awkward sentences and fixing spelling/punctuation errors. Other than that, I think you're good! I look forward to seeing more of your story :)
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