Reviewer- hayxden
~P R O S~
⭐︎The mood of this book is set up really well. Readers can easily picture the scene and the emotions of the characters are vivid.
⭐︎The descriptions are amazing!
⭐︎I love dystopian books, so I really enjoyed this one!
⭐︎I love Alex and Mara's relationship! It is so well displayed and really makes readers connect with the characters you have created (and that's really important!)
~C O N S~
⭐︎I would recommend putting a warning in the description as it has some mature language/ content and there is a young audience on here.
⭐︎The chapters are pretty long. If they are 2,000-3,000 words I would recommend splitting them in half as most readers are on mobile and prefer shorter chapters.
⭐︎I've seen this with a lot of books on here (and struggled with it myself lol), but the book switches between tenses. It's the small words like "is" that should be "was". It's a very easy fix and easily mixed up. Reading through and changing those small words would improve the flow of your book!
Good job @hazyshadow! This book deserves more recognition!
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