Reviewer-
PROS:
-The language used in this story is very articulate! This isn't something I normally come across when reviewing, so great job on that!
-I love how the story's planned out. You start off with an introduction from Ryka (Ray)'s best friend; Ridhs, and then you move on with the story! This is probably one of the first stories I've reviewed where an introduction doesn't come from the main character, so cheers to you for starting off on a different viewpoint!
CONS:
-TBH, I didn't really find anything. After even nitpicking for a bit the only somewhat awkward thing I found was the tile of the first chapter; "I got proposed". That's like literally the only thing I found, and you don't even really have to change it... but if you're planning on it then maybe you could change it to something like "I was proposed to" or "He proposed!"
SUMMARY:
Overall I really like how the story's going so far! I couldn't find anything that absolutely needed to be change.I'm excited to see how this story unfolds!
KAMU SEDANG MEMBACA
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