I am still in the process of editing and revising this whole book on another platform. I have made some changes and revised but I still have a long way to go. Outside of grammar mechanics if you guys see anything that may seem off or could be written better please let me know.
If something seems confusing in my story please let me know! In my previous post about editing and revising I said you guys would be my beta readers but technically you aren't. Beta readers will read the finished revised and edited book:the finished product. So to all new and later readers please make sure you are really thinking about the plot of the story and my characters as you are reading. Does everything sound like it's going smoothly?
Does the plot make sense and nothing random pops into the story? Can you hear my characters voice and see the types of personalities they have? Can you see them change and grow over time? What do you think could be added or left out to make the story better? Please don't hesitate to tell me all your thoughts.☺️
-Dovey
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WISTFUL IBC Book 2(Editing&Revising)
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