Kings Obsession

Kings Obsession

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DarkDragonRider By DarkDragonRider Updated Jan 04

James is a heartless king of a big kingdom, he murdered his parents at the age of 12 so he could take over the throne. he is cruel, cold-hearted and did not care for his people. until one day when he leads an attack on a village that failed to pay there bills he comes across a girl and instantly becomes love obsessed with her.

Alice is a farm girl who lives with her parents in a small village. she lives a happy life until the king attacks her village and she is captured and taken to the kings castle and is forced to become the kings personal servant.

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AtaliLaqua02 AtaliLaqua02 Oct 17, 2016
Ok, hi, I like the story idea, I think it's awesome!
                              Please don't take this the wrong way, I'm only trying to help, but you are using the wrong 'there' in most of your sentences.  It's supposed to be 'their'.  thanks for listening!
Ryannebeth Ryannebeth Dec 31, 2016
Wow. This is a good chapter. After just reading this, I'm fascinated at what's going to happen next. Great job!
author_of_awesome author_of_awesome Dec 10, 2016
Lovely work, I'm wondering, what backstories are there to offer?
TWTChance TWTChance Dec 28, 2016
Wow a bit of love at first sight, at least for the king that is.
                              [I'm also writing a story and would really appreciate feedback on: Finding Clover. Thanks ☺️]
diseases diseases Jan 12
ok back up wyd? this is gonna be one heck of a romance if she actually falls for him. 🤢
Vicky3495 Vicky3495 Nov 10, 2016
Hey I know your story is not edited, but I think you've got potential, it's just a shame that you have small mistakes like this, it's quite the big repetition :/. Try to find an editor and I'm sure that your story will be a massive success :)