I Spy One Direction

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Hi!

I don't have the time to read ALL the 84 parts (good job, that's a lot of writing :) you're really passionate) but what I did get from the parts...

-Nice spelling

-Great grammar

-Easy to follow

-Clear ideas

-Good pace

With that said, there's nothing more to say about your story!

~Julian

Date: 25 June 2014

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