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Dear chloelewislord,

Sorry for such a long delay.

But the review hath arrivéd!

A reoccurring problem is punctuation... But to be honest you're a catchy writer.

Nothing much to say.

Keep writing. Keep reading. Revise and correct punctuation (where you put the commas (,) and periods (.)--they come before the quotation marks (").

Example:

"Hello," said John, "My name is John."

Just a small tip. :)

xox,

~Julian

Date: 24 June 2014