BOOK SUGGESTIONS/ CRITICIZE FOR FREE! II

What the Spell?

Hey,

There's practically nothing to edit! :(

But I really liked the spell/little poem. I liked the rhyming couplets, and it teases iambic pentameter (the same rhythm Shakespeare used) but only a few beats too long or short! Darn.

Keep writing!!!!

I like it.

~Julian

Date: 24 June 2014